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时间: 2021-11-16 08:40:54 | 作者：不会英语杨某人 | 来源: 喜蛋文章网 | 编辑: admin | 阅读: 88次

破除模板和句型推荐

在字数本来就不多的文章中充斥大量套句十分影响阅卷定档，上文一个thought-provoking,但是二段既没有深刻的分析，也没有独特的见解，就怎么thought-provoking了？就是睁着眼睛说瞎话的感觉。想要高分，忘记假大空。

干货分割线 模板思维和句型参考

如何克服模板？比如看看这个英语二大作文结尾句：Based on the analyses, we could conclude that the current phenomenon is no surprise. The tendency will continue to exist in the future and we are certain to reap benefits from it.

“我预测上图这个趋势会持续”（相信大家应该见过），那我请问哪个图表作文不能加这句话？所以这个句子极大概率被判定模板句，不是因为你套用了某个句型或者表达，而是你想说的话就是假大空的模板句。后半句 we are certain to reap benefits from it相对就好一些，毕竟它限定了前文必须讲一些“优点，益处”，就不是那种任何作文都能无脑套上的。

再比如看这个 题目是 大家选择不同的支付方式

结尾：

It would be hard to decide which one is the best way of payment. In fact, it depends on individual habit and the technology of a society, and thus it is advisable to follow your heart and stick to what suits you. 就是不要那种任何文章都能套用的话

要破除的是模板思维！！！

要破除的是模板思维！！！

要破除的是模板思维！！！

这里强调两点

第一 是不是流于模板主要是看你原创性的内容，或者说专门为了这篇文章而进行的构思，词句只是辅助作用。

第二 同学基础不同，基础弱的同学建议脚踏实地，坚持模板用对，句子写对，混个及格就好了，不要太难为自己。基础好的同学有余力可以去研究反模板的问题。

以下地道句型来自外刊酌情借鉴，虽然肯定胜过假大空的套话，但是具体论述的内容还需要自己思考添加，句型都是花架子，内容和逻辑才是血肉身体。

1 look more like…than

Soon the city looked more like Venice than Paris.

这是之前法国巴黎大水时的报道

Sth looks more like A than B. 可看作Sth is not B not A.的大致替换，涉及事物两面中 重点强调某一方面。

2021 英语一

Ironically, the very technology of mobile-phones that was designed to bring humans closer together has left us isolated from our community.

当然就可以改写为

If not handled properly, mobile-phones look more like a curse of isolation than powerful devices to bring humans closer.

正话反说也行

If handled properly, mobile-phones look more like powerful devices to bring humans closer than a curse of isolation.

2021 英语一

Viewed right mindset, books look like more like a wonderful teacher to offer you endless knowledge on various topics and show you new world and stories than merely a decoration for boast.

2 What…，was then …

这是来自于《美国我们的故事》

中文：这段在今天乘飞机只需六个小时的旅程,在当时却需要至少两个月。

字幕：What takes us six hours today by plane，was then a voyage of more than two months.

简单来说就是What…，was then …，（用于时间对比，之前和之后的不同）

2008 合作

What we are capable of on our won previously, is now a piece of cake through cooperation.

2009 互联网“远”与“近”

What we are capable of toady with the click of a mouse, was then an overwhelming amount of information search and analyses.

2021 英语二 也可以用来描述原因

之前大家觉得城市成活压力大，但是也能激励大家

What we are afraid of previously--excessively high living costs, turns out to be our driving force to pursue better education, better jobs even better lives.

3 otherwise

表达来自于真题文本，之前也说过阅二刷三刷的时候是模仿表达，用于写作（阅读的尽头是写作）

2021 text4 英语一

the White House claimed that it could invalidate any otherwise legitimate state law that it disagrees with.

译文：使本来合法的州法律无效

2021 text2 英语一

The strategy also aims to ensure that carbon in woody material removed from the forests is locked away in the form of solid lumber or burned as biofuel in vehicles that would otherwise run on fossil fuels.

译文：这些车本来依靠化石燃料来行驶

这里使用了otherwise的神韵在于，用在复合名词上或者情态动词后，用于表达两种不同的情况对比，我们上例子：

政府资助贫穷孩子很重要，不然这些孩子就会辍学。

后半句同学们就有可能写成Otherwise，those kids will be out of school.这样一个笨拙的句子，但是变成复合定语：

Financial support from our government to otherwise-out-of-school students plays a critical role in rural education.

去支持 “否则/在另一情况下 就要辍学的孩子” 这就很轻巧

小作文感谢信 你帮助我走出困境

Your enthusiastic reception helps me, an otherwise-get-into-trouble girl, out of dilemma.

4 并列排比

这是来自于《美国我们的故事》

中文：捐款者不论贫富不论地域。捐款少则一美分、五美分，多则五美元、十美元，甚至几千美元。

字幕：Donations flood in from all across the country, rich and poor, East and West. Pennies and nickels, fives and tens, even thousands of dollars.

人话就是并列排比，名词要么就简单点A and B，简约朴素；要么就像上文多角度（核心在这）并列排比，奢华大气。当然，这个对基本功和文章构思具有一定的考验。

2021 英语二 大作文

Regular exercise has gained more popularity among the public, rich and poor, youngsters and adults, even people in their sixties and seventies.

2009 英语一

The Internet has transformed our lives in ways big and small, consciously and unconsciously, even beyond our imagination.

当然写句子的排比也是可以的，就怕字数超了。

The Internet has brought us far more benefits than we could ever imagine. With the click of a mouse, we can search for an ocean of information, make an purchase of literally any goods, even talk to anyone regardless of distance.

5 in…way的穿插

这是来自于《美国我们的故事》

中文：这项技术以一种史无前例的方式将人们紧密相连。

字幕：This technology connects people in a way that never before in the history of mankind has there been that kind of connection.

这个要点就是in a way that never before接上倒装句，表示“以一种 史无前例/前所未有 的方式”

2006 英语一翻译

His function is analogous to that of a judge, who must accept the obligation of revealing in as obvious a manner as possible the course of reasoning which led him to his decision.

这个要点就是in a manner as obvious as possible的穿插形式，表示以“一种 尽可能明显的 的方式”，当然，obvious可以酌情替换，比如in a manner as plain as possible

in a manner as soon as possible等等

比如对于科技类（网络）

This wonder of Internet closely connects people in a way that never before in the history of mankind has there been that kind of technology.

比如对于提出建议解决某类问题

动作主体are supposed to the problem of…in a manner as soon as possible

动作主体are supposed to raise the awareness of sth among the public in a manner as plain as possible

最后 句型表达小道而已，内容逻辑才是王道。构思才是一切。

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