上海高考英语作文助力之“夹叙夹议篇”

对于“夹叙夹议”类作文，难点就在于对于“叙”和“议”的比例分配，今天Yuki就给大家展示一篇这类文章的范文：

Guided Writing：父母的言传身教在孩子的成长过程中往往起到重要的作用，请结合自身的经历，描述一件印象深刻的事例，并谈谈感受。

In contemporary society, parent’s words and behaviors are exerting an increasingly important influence on children. As for me, my mother, a common teacher, has performed a significant role in my life, which can be vividly portrayed in the following story.

Last summer, my mother volunteered to work as, against boiling heat wave, a substitute teacher of poor kids in a remote mountain village. Having suffered a lot during her volunteer experience, my mom was even not able to have a bath every week. At first, I was confused why she was doing so, inspiring me to inquire my mom about the reason. She replied with a smile,’The rose is in her hand, as the saying goes, the flavor in mine. Dear, something is stirring inside you when giving others a helping hand.’

My mom’s behavior and words have deeply impressed me. Just as what she is sticking to, the pursuit of universal love and real beauty contributes to a rewarding life, encouraging her to volunteer to teach in such a remote area. I appreciate my mom so much for planting a seed of kindness and willingness in my inner heart, which may benefit me forever.

Taking what has been stated above into account, we can see what parents say and how they behave are of subtle influence on their children.

（221 words，谈同学）

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