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有人能带我查下英语作文的错误吗

谁能帮我检查一下这边英语作文的错误？

(1) the mother was ill, lie on the bed, I sat in the motherx27s bedside computers. rnrnrn(2) mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me. Said she was felt which place not feeling too well, say again she had a terrible dream, say her young from time to tome how healthy, one is able to do many live. Then I always very impatient. rnrnrn(3) once, mother suddenly crouched over come closer to computer said: "you always do on your computer? Donx27t you feel tired?" rnrnrn4 "chat." I impatiently say. rnrnrn[" chat? And who talk?" Mother asked again. rnrnrn[6] "a field of, donx27t know." rnrnrn[7] "incognizant?" Mother seemed very puzzled, "that is said what ah?" rnrnrnStuff "anyway also boring, literally say what also do the same." rnrnrn⑼ "oh." Mother cryptically watched, and as a tired though long give a sigh, to lie to go back to bed. rnrnrn⑽ again I chatted, inadvertently old look at her mother, she is the zheng fix attention on staring at the ceiling with rapture. My heart suddenly move. My name is here with mother, but can do for her some rice pour water outside, also do? rnrnrnMy mother is born when mercenary dropped the trouble, for many years has been praised by illnesses, this year is added in the many this elderly patient. Maybe because mother longyear sick, she care, we also become accustomed, sometimes home on the weekends and seldom think to be active and help her do something, always her every ground stem this dry it. rnrnrn⑿ mother the sick, is tired disease. She was ill, not only get our sympathy, but who saw she would complain, think she tire yourself ill, harm we also follow involvement. Whenever we complain mother always didnx27t say anything, as if she really like doing something wrong. rnrnrn[13] I turn off the computer, give mother cup of water. Without waiting for what I said, the mother said: "see computer tired eyes? Quick lie down with his eyes closed and rest a while." rnrnrn14 I promise, pull a quilt lay in the motherx27s side. I said, "mom, you tell me what you had before, let me see if I can write articles." rnrnrn⒂ mother surprise to temporarily donx27t know what to say. I lay silent and waited patiently for she said. rnrnrnDisplayed suddenly felt that the original lying in motherx27s side, is such feeling warm. rnrnrn⒄ but I have forgotten for many years.
　　回答：
　　想必楼主也意识到了，正如另外一位回答者说的那样，机器翻译或网络翻译把文章给糟蹋了。
　　机器翻译只有在翻译科技论文时才能达到比较可靠的准确率，而文学翻译，甚至生活化的文字翻译都远远不能让人满意。
　　很多的时候我们让机器或网络翻译，有一个好处是把一些难的词汇给代我们查了出来，但网络或机器还远不能将词汇连接成语法和逻辑都正确的句子，更谈不上文采和风格了。翻译讲求信达雅，而机器翻译只能满足”信“的一小部分而已。
　　所以，对于文学作品，很多时候，与其机器翻译后再人工修改，就不如一开始就自己翻，虽然 前者已经给出了蓝本，可改的过程会多少受到其误导，而自己写虽然有抬笔忘字、步步艰难之感，但后者具有开创性，更能提高英语、汉语的理解和表达能力。
　　下面是对一段的修改，楼主可以参照比较一下：
　　原文：mother most of the time is quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt consider talking to me. Said she was felt which place not feeling too well, say again she had a terrible dream, say her young from time to tome how healthy, one is able to do many live. Then I always very impatient.

　　修改：Most of time, mother was quietly lying in bed, but sometimes she would tempt to consider talking to me. She said she was not feeling very well and she had a terrible dream. And then she said she was healthy when young. Hearing all these, I became very impatient.

　　希望对你有所帮助！
看得懂！没办法改!语法和表达错误太多！

帮我查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误的

Get Ready For Deamsrn Many people have many dreams.Some people are want to be a doctor.Some people are want to be a policeman.Some people are want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams,you should get ready for dreams.rn First,you can do some things about your dreams.For example,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.Second,you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly,you must have to work hard for your dreams.rn A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high,then use your own two legs."So you will hard for your dreams will come true.
首先，写得不错，有一些小语法错误。以下是改正过的
有些疑问，什么叫you should learn and read about your dreams? 你应该学和读你的梦想？
Get Ready For Deams
Many people have many dreams.Some people want to be doctors.Some people want to be police officers.Some people want to be actors/actresses.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams,you should get ready for them.
First,you can do some things about your dreams.For example,a boy wants to be a bank teller one day,he can learn math well.Second,you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly,you must have to work hard for your dreams.
A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high,then use your own two legs." The dreams you work hard for will come true.
第二句some people want to be(删掉are)。第三句、第四句同理删掉are。第一段最后的dreams可以改为them，不会显得太重复。
第一句can改为should，语气更强烈，some things 改为something，about改为for。one day可以删掉或者改为in the future，can改为should。read后加something。it will broaden your horizen。删掉have to，hard改为harder。
第三段最后一句没看懂，是不是梦想就能实现的意思，可以写成then your dreams will come ture.
Some people are want to be a doctor 这里不能用are，应改为Some people want to be a doctor
后面1句也是这样改
if a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he should learn math wellyou should learn and read about your dreams 额 我认为about your dreams 最好改为for your dreams 其他的也是这样改
you must have to work hard for your dreams. must和have to是不可以同时用的 这里建议用must
So you will hard for your dreams will come true 额 这里的语法有问题 你的意思是：你的努力会得到回报吗？ 那可以这样写：:Your efforts will pay off in time。

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Get Ready For Dreams
Many people have many dreams.Some people want to be a doctor.Some people want to be a policeman.Some people want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams, you should get ready for dreams.

First, you can do some things for your dreams.For example, a boy wants to be a bank clerk one day. He can learn math well.Second, you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly, you must have to work hard for your dreams.

A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high, then use your own two legs."So you will be hard for your dreams will come true.
are want to be ;,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.这几个地方错了

哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误。急！！！在线检查！！

1.Today is my birthday. I invited my friends and classmates. We have fun together. Time flies. Instant we all go home. But I really enjoyed this day.rnrn2.This summer I went to Qinghai. Everywhere there is a style yellow rape. Large tracts of grassland. There is blue sky. We went horseback riding. And sheep to play. I very much enjoyed the trip
第一句中 首先，动词时态不一致，应该统一用过去式，即：we had fun together.其次是Instant we all go home这句话，就你的句子中来说你的instant应该是修饰go的吧，所以应该用副词形式，还有我个人认为逻辑上有点小问题，应该是他们回家吧，你在你自己的家，即instantly they all went home.对于I invited my friends and classmates。我个人认为句子没有语法问题，但是意思似乎有点不完整。另外，个人觉得instant这个词用的不大妥当，你可再琢磨一个更好的词。
第二句话大概知道了你想说的意思，但是我只能说你那是典型的metaphrase，即literal translation,属于chinglish。就比如we went horeback riding,其实你说we went horse riding就可以了。
但是能看出你还是有东西可以写，很好哟，我写作文时都不知道该写什么，呵呵，上面只是我的一些个人意见哈，加油加油哦！
1.Today is my birthday. I invited my friends and classmates. We _had_ fun together. Time flew. _We_ _have_ all _gone_ home_, but_ I really enjoyed this day.

2.I went to Qinghai _this summer_. _There_ is a _stylish_ yellow _rod_ _and_ large tracts of grassland. There is _the_ blue sky. We went _horse_ riding_, and_ played with the sheep. I enjoyed the trip _very much._

严肃说，rape字勿乱用，这字是强奸的意思。要说一支杆，用rod。
1.不完整,是个病句~~~I invited my friends and classmates干嘛？应修改，例如I invited my friends and classmates to my home.
2.But I really enjoyed this day？是But I really enjoyed today吧。。。
3.第一提的那些动词不对，要统一用过去式
4.I very much enjoyed the trip？个人认为应该I 后面应该加上be动词
1那个时态注意，we had fun today，还有那个went home注意保持事态一致。Instant 这句有问题。
2 rape是强奸的意思，那句完全看不懂。

有谁能帮我检查一下英语作文吗？谢谢！

谢谢！谢谢！谢谢！

您好，这篇英语课文总体上写得还不错，看出题主用心选词用心写作了，但是还是有些小毛病，试修改如下：
1. Yesterday 第一个字母y要大写。
2. on the street建议改为in the street (如果描述住在……大街可以用on ,但指在街上有具体活动活动做则最好用in)。
3.didn't ignore me中的didn't去掉，ignored（一般过去时），应该是没有理我，你写的是“没有不理我”。
4.Amy, and she said…（加个and）。
5. a argument 改为an argument。
6. can't改为could, play… any… no longer改为 no longer play computer games
8.have got to改为had got to

9.will say sorry改为would say sorry
以上要注意时态一致，一般过去时较多。
回答完毕，希望能帮到你！
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我写了一篇英语作文，希望有人能帮我检查出错误！

As time went by,I have spent three monthes in the high school.During that time,I change a lot and learn too much.When I went to the school,everthing appeared new and fresh to me.There are lots of building and trees.Itx27s very beautiful.I made lots of friengs who are kind and friendly.Everyday,I will fold the bed and wash my clothes.I work hard everyday.I hope I can get good grade.After class,I take part in lots of activities.
As time went by,I have spent three “months” in the high school.During that time,I "have changed" a lot and "learned much".When I "first came" to the school,everthing "seemed" new and fresh to me.There are lots of building and trees.It's very beautiful.I made lots of friengs who are kind and friendly.Everyday,I "clean" the bed and wash my clothes.I work hard everyday.I hope I can get good grade.After class,I take part in lots of activities.

改的用引号标注了 凑合看吧
too much so much too 有一点贬义
building buildings
朋友写错了
整篇文章改成过去式 会更好
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