英语作文中有哪些语法及词汇错误

第一行 have中文化了 改成 we may experience many things会生动得多 fellings 首先不可数 不加s 另外，改成emotion更恰当，FEEL表示感受，不是你所认为的感受的感受，emotion表示情感。can 去掉
第二行 must改成had better sipirit首先不加s，另外用在这也不对，这词意思精神，应该为mind,in good mind指保持好心情，这是习语，固定用法
不要总用I think，举个例子，第四行可以改成，I like music quite a lot, so I often enjoy myself with light music when I have some spare time, which always makes me fell relax and comfortebal after all day's hardwok.尽量用插入语和变换句式让你的表达变得丰富一些。

写的很好，没有错的。翻译是：
在我们的生活中，我们会有很多的经验。他们经常影响我们的感觉。他们可以让我们快乐或悲伤。坏的感觉对我们的健康是有害的。所以我们必须保持良好的精神。这里有一些建议：
1。我非常喜欢音乐。所以我觉得音乐能让我开心。
2。与朋友聊天是一个有用的想法。你可以从他们那里得到一些帮助。
3。我觉得快乐，当我穿上我最喜欢的衣服。我想你也会感到快乐，当你穿上你最喜欢的衣服。
4睡眠。也许能改变我们的心情。如果我们睡得好，我们就会感到高兴，当我们起床的时候。

. 2.Talk with friends is a useful idea.You can get some help from them.这句中的“talk”应用“talking”

4.Maybe sleep can change our feelings.If we sleep well, we will feel happy when we get up.这句中的“sleep”应该为“sleeping”

我个人认为“So we must stay in good spirits.”这句中的“must”用“should”可能更好一些。

希望能帮到你！！！

we may have many experiences如果你是想说我们也许有许多经历，那就应该用maybe.
They affect our fellings often应该把often放在they之后。
So I think music can make me happy again.用again不知道你要表达什么。
Talk with friends is a useful idea应该用talking.
.I will feel happy 去掉will
Maybe sleep can change 用sleeping

个人的一些小看法：
1.名词： 单复数用错。
原因: A:受中文母语影响，中文里只需加上数词或者其他代表数量级程度的词，无须变形就可作为复数意义，而英语有单复数之别，有集体名词代表复数等区别。
B:英语单词中变形规则不熟悉。尤其是不规则的变形。
2 动词：动词变形如动词原形，第三人称单数区别。
原因： 和名词出错的原因雷同。受母语中文的影响。不规则变形。
3. 时态。
原因: 中文时态表达只需要通过时间点或者介词来表达。
而英文中，有四大类，过去时,现在时,将来时,过去将来时。细分可以到8类，再细分到16类。

4. 单词用错
原因：（哈哈，主要是我们词汇量不够，容易不小心误用），包括褒贬含义等。

总之，学习一门语言，最主要是练习，交流。交流，练习。
practice makes perfect.错误就会越来越少。

1.人称一致（中国人总是我你的用 老外不会 所以写文章别一会你 一会我的）
2. 时态一致（很明显中国的语法要简单 什么时间发生的事 动词都不会有什么变化 ，英语就会相对弱智一些，有神马过去时完成时等各种时态）
3.单复数（中国人没这用法）
4.第三人称单数
中国人容易犯错误的地方大多是因为中西方语言习惯上的差异，汉语没有的习惯自然在用的时候一不注意就忘掉了。

1.句子成分残缺不全
　　We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)
　　We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
　　We should read books may be useful to us. (误)
　　We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
　　2.句子成分多余
　　This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
　　One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
　　The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
　　The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
　　3.主谓不一致
　　Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
　　Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
　　My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
　　My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
　　4.动词时态、语态的误用
　　I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
　　I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
　　We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
　　We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
　　I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)
　　I have been studying in the college for two years(正)
　　5.词类混淆
　　It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
　　In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
　　Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
　　Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
　　The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)
　　The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正)

这个问题太大了吧 语法、单词之类的都会出错的啊

需要改进的地方很多，简单改改如下：
There are two main reasons for choosing a good major and a prestigious university. It is clear that a good major is very important, but choosing a suitable university is equally essential.

Here are seceral suggestions for these students. Firstly, it is obvious that one should always follow his passion and choose the majoys that he is interested in, so that after he graduated, he could contribute to the society by probably inventing something useful to his or her country. Secondly, a excellent university will make sure that you get a better job and high salaries in the future.

No one can deny that selecting a good university is not important to one's life because the environment of the university decides whether you will enjoy a better living for the rest of your life.

university's 这样的说法绝对是错误的。。。

There are two main reasons for choosing a good major or a good university. It is clear that ,on one hand, a good major is very important ,on the other hand, needless to say, a good university is equally important ,too.
Here are several suggestions on these problems. For one thing, it is obvious that if you like some interesting majors or you feel society will need some majors in the future . You should choose the major that you like . For another thing, it goes without saying that if you would like to choose more lessons or to have better job chances in the future, you should choose a good university.
No noe can deny that. I think you should choose a good university . Because university's environment is very important.

1.句子成分残缺不全 We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误) We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正) We should read books may be useful to us. (误) We should read books which may be useful to us. (正) 2.句子成分多余 This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误) One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正) The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误) The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正) 3.主谓不一致 Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误) Some think that reading should be selective. (正) 1/3页 My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误) My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正) 4.动词时态、语态的误用 I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误) I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)

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