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我有一个甜蜜的梦想——就是长大后像爷爷那样做一个养蜂人。
我的老家在江津支坪乡下，老屋是一个掩映在绿树花海里的农家小院。那里有四季开不败的花儿，有四季品不完的果香。爷爷在小院的里里外外养了六十多桶蜜蜂，儿时的我，就在这四季花香里，听着那蜂儿“嗡嗡”地歌唱着一天天长大。
今年暑假的一天清晨，我正在小院的葡萄架下专心读书，不知何时爷爷来到了身边。他笑眯眯地逗我说：“楠楠，又在看你那些明星故事啦？”
“才不是呢！”我白了他一眼说，“我要参加今年的‘中华魂’读书征文演讲活动，我读的是活动用书——《理—想—点—亮—人—生》！”
“嗯——理想点亮人生，有意思啊！里面都说了些啥？”
“爷爷，里面都是教育我们要树立远大理想的故事，有周恩来为中华崛起而发奋读书；有童第周发奋争气学习，成功完成了剥除青蛙卵外皮实验的故事......”我如数家珍地给爷爷列举着一个个感人故事。
“好啊好啊！欸——楠楠，你读了这么多故事，想没想过长大后干什么哟？”
“这个——咋说呢？”想当明星吧，爸爸妈妈教育我不要盲目追星；想当科学家嘛，我还真不知道当个什么样的科学家呢......
爷爷看我答不上来，又笑眯眯地说：“楠楠，等你将来大学毕业了，回来跟我一起养蜜蜂，好不好？”
“养蜜蜂？好啊！又好玩，又有甜甜的蜂蜜吃......”
“养蜜蜂是好玩，成天在果林花丛里跟那些小精灵打交道，心情舒畅啊！”爷爷高兴地说，“更重要的是，养蜂会让你做事细心，做人有爱心讲诚信，这是甜蜜的事业啊！”
是的，养蜜蜂就是爷爷甜蜜的事业啊！乡亲们都说爷爷养蜜蜂像喜欢幺儿一样，他那些蜜蜂每年产的一两千斤蜂蜜，都是乡邻和一些老客户来买走的。爷爷有钱了，村里不管谁家的孩子考上大学，他都要拿出千儿八百地奖励；过时过节，他总要带上蜂蜜或买些礼品到敬老院探望五保老人；他还捐出三万元，为村里修了一条水泥便道呢......像爷爷那样做一个养蜂人不是很好吗？
爷爷见我呆呆地想着，又语重心长地对我说：“楠楠，不管你长大干啥，只要凭本事找钱，做事对得起良心，就是我的好孙女。当然啰，如果将来你成了什么伟人，成了什么作家、科学家的，能给国家和人民做出更大的贡献，那就更好啦！”说完，他就去侍弄他那些宝贝蜜蜂去了。
望着爷爷走进花丛里的背影，我突然感到自己应该快快长大，快快接过他的甜蜜事业，把那些花儿蜂儿侍弄好，像爷爷那样，诚信做人，把爱心奉献给乡邻和社会。让甜蜜的梦想点亮我的人生！

审题之后不难看出，题干的前半句和后半句用so that链接，是一个非常典型的结果状语从句。也正因如此使得很多考生不太清楚这个道题的讨论重点是什么，是前半句的原因，还是后半句的结果。其实题干中出现这种因果关系的时候，我们可以将其简单地分成两类。
1.有明显的背景
Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore，children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20210318
上题中的第一句明显是个背景的介绍，因此这道题的讨论重点自然就是题干中的第二句。类似的题目还有：
The news media has become more influential in people’s lives. Some people, therefore, think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2021023
Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 20210525
Nowadays more and more people are using cell phones and computers to communicate with others. Therefore, they are losing the ability of face-to-face communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20211126
在仔细读题之后，考生们很容易就能区分开题干中的背景信息，进而就可以明确知道该题目的讨论重点是什么。
2.没有明确背景的
这类题就比较讨厌了，题干中并没有明确的背景信息，考生们不太容易判断该题目究竟是原因和结果一块讨论，还是只讨论结果即可，例如本文最开始的11月01日的考题。其实，各位不必多虑，也不必纠结。首先，这类题目中的因果关系往往都是塑料因果关系，经不起推敲。其次，为了以保万全我们在文中就题干的原因和结果分别展开讨论，这样肯定十分对题而不可能出现偏题。
见下题：
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures, because we can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20211005
面对此题，考生们肯定能够明确前半句是一定要重点讨论的，但是后半句这个原因状语从句呢？讨论它总比不讨论的好。
下题也是如此：
Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20211008
电子阅读是不是能完全取代图书馆的功能是一定会出现在文章当中的。因此，类似这类题目，我们就将这个因果关系看成是题干需要我们讨论的两个题干观点。分别讨论，分别总结。
Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20211101
本题例文如下：
After realizing how much money people pay for their transportation monthly, some of them call on governments to heavily finance public transport system, and others even suggest that the system should be fully funded by governments so it can be free of charge for every user. However, from my perspective, a system like this must be a thankless one.
开头段，不仅介绍了背景，点明了题目。笔者还强调了自身的立场。
While discussing whether a city needs a free public transport system or not, we have to put sufficient emphasis on some possibly unwelcomed outcomes caused by it. Chiefly, supposing we already had a system like this, almost every day I would certainly take bus for 1 hour to go shopping in a far-away but cheap supermarket where I could save 20 or 50 Yuan for a daily shopping. This is to say, this kind of traffic demand is definitely unnecessary, and it can be greatly stimulated by the free system. As a result, more social resources such as transport infrastructure would be unduly used. On top of this, investing and remaining this system must be fairly costly, imposing unbearable financial stress on governments.
主一段：笔者着重讨论题干中的结论，既我们需要不需要一个完全免费的公共交通系统。
Instead of funding the system fully, governments are supposed to subsidize it more appropriately. The funding from governments should be utilized for keeping the fare reasonable and especially acceptable for low-income population such as the unemployed and minors. An instance in point is that in most countries students under 18 can buy some discount tickets for airlines, trains, buses and subways. The subsidy provided by governments makes the system more affordable by every public transport user.
主二段，笔者重点讨论题目中的原因，既公共交通系统需要不需要政府的资助。
In conclusion, although we do not need free public transport since it might cause plenty of adverse problems to us, the governmental subsidy is still imperative.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.

On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place. This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crime committed. If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.

In my opinion and intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity. There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and a maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Completion Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thieves stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger. Also a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.

对于考官来说，雅思写作是按照项目打分的。写作时考生需要估计的测试点包括如下几个：
第一， 有明确的观点，有有力的论据，并且利用各类论据进行富有逻辑性的论证。
第二， 作文的框架结构合理。不同的提问方式，需要采用不同的框架结构来应对。及时是相同的题目和提问方式，也可以采取更加富有逻辑性和条理性的逻辑结构来进行论证。
第三， 段落结构合理。段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间有流畅的衔接和连贯。
第四， 语法正确，用词地道，句法复杂多变。
一旦符合如上的四个标准，雅思写作获得高分，便是水到渠成的事情了。
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书名 ：顾家北手把手教你雅思写作

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作者: 顾家北 

出版社： 中国人民大学出版社

出版年: 2021-8

页数: 325

内容简介 ：

《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作》系作者多年呕心力作，并经过课堂反复实践，遵照中国雅思考生学习写作的特点，编排合理、内容丰富、循序渐进。全书精选雅思近几年有代表性的话题，详细阐述每种话题的特点、正确审题的方法、快速思路拓展、详细论证的常用手法，以及考官认可的论据与素材。在详细对话题进行解析的同时，作者强调举一反三的能力，确保所学习的范文可以广泛适用各种话题，充分覆盖近期雅思写作题库。

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顾家北，研究主流语言考试，专攻写作语法；深谙西方大学书面语，熟悉不同科目的研究和学习；顾家北向雅思考生提供正确的书面语写作方法，迅速提高雅思写作成绩，树立正确的文书写作观念，打破了中国学生作文成绩普遍最低的定律。

雅思小作文高分模板之表格题

一.表格题
1. 找出最大值，最小值，以及一般值
2. 进行分析比较，找出近似值和相差很大的数值

二.常用句式
1.a is nearly /more than…times as much/many/large as b.
a是b的…倍。
2. be the same as…
与…相同
3.表原因的句子：
(1). cause-effect (较常用) ：XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for … (一个句子/shared the same tendency), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so …
(2). effect-cause (较常用)
XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of … (一个句子/shared the same tendency), because …
it is adj. that …
it is unimaginable that …
it is undeniable that …
it is interesting to discover that …

三.雅思小作文的一个模板：
1.开头
This graph/pie chart/table/bar chart reflects the (rate/percentage/proportion/number …) of (对象) in(place/country)from …to…
According to the figure , it is not surpring findings that there was/were 总体趋势的描述(the overall trend tended to indicate…/the general trend is…/其他)
2.结尾
In conclude , the overall trend tended to illustrate ……during this **-year period

以上就是关于雅思小作文高分模板之表格题的全部内容，大家可以看到雅思小作文表格题写作的重点在于对比和分析，所以大家在备考雅思小作文表格题的时候一定要对这两个部分有所准备。

推荐慎小嶷的作文书，里面有各类小作文模板的。关于写作预测什么的也建议去慎小嶷的新浪博客经常看看，把考前2个月的题目大概过一遍，

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