2022年今年河南高考英语作文你们怎么写的

如果你是他身边的人，也可以。可惜了，你不是。那就不能得分。

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 ...................................... 译: 我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街，不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达，前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间，其中一个是卧室，其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床，一个沙发和一个办公桌，25平方米sdom. 实践出真知。 9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。 11.More hasty，less speed. 欲速则不达。 12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。 13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。 14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。 15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。 17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。 18.well begun，half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。 19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。 20.Out of sight，out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。 21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。 23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。 24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。 25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 26.live not to eat，but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。 27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。 28.East or west，home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。 29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。 30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。 31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。 34.An idle youth，a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 35.As the tree，so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。 36.To live is to learn，to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着

My Spare Time Nowadays,societies shools families or even students themselves give high shool students too much pressure.To improve learning efficiency and lead a active lifestyle,it's important to remove the high pressure.So.we need something to depart our attention.The thing is our hobbies definitely. In my spare time,I'd.like to take some aerobic sports such like playing tennis,jogging or playing.basketball.Listening to music is also a wonderful choice.The soft gentle tune make me feel relaxed.I almost forget all those trouble which disturbed me.It's a fascinating thing to go through. Finally,Knowing how to fix ourselves is a lesson that all of us need to take

for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School

高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得0-5分。高考英语作文，不管是全国卷，还是地方卷，都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分，字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下：1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．概要部分少于20词或多于40词；全文少于130词或多于180词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5．拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6．如字迹难以辨认，以致影响表达，将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档：（21—25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档：（16—20分）完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（11—15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容，但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段，内容基本连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（6—10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一，所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（1—5分）未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一，所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。

写满 字写大点即可 字数够了整洁 就是17分左右了
再有些比较好的句子 20分

一般要求120词，写满当然最好，但一般会空一至两行

1.Deng Yaping
Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
译文：
邓亚萍
邓亚萍，女，28岁，河南人，一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军，并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷，指引她走向成功。4岁时，她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球；8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军；1998年，成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上，她向我们证明了：个子矮小并不重要，勤奋才是成功的关键。
2. 作文原题：
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为：
1. 不应收门票
2. 公园是公众休闲的地方
3. 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。
40％的同学认为：
1. 应收门票，但票价不宜高
2. 支付园林工人工资
3. 购新花木

满分作文列表：

高考满分作文1(1号题)

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

3. The Olympic Games
The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games.
The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor.
It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world.
www.cooyu.net
[参考译文]
奥运会
奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。
奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的，大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目：赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年，然后，公元397年，被罗马皇帝禁止举办。
直到1896年，第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起，奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事，也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。
4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not.
Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.
5.Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health.

So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish.

But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place.
回答者： canspringbefar - 经理 五级 1-2 14:52
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节 情景作文（20分）
一、 内容要点：
1． 讨论
2． 爬山
3． 捡拾别人（或收拾自己）的垃圾
4． 投放垃圾
二、 说明：内容要点可用不同方式表达。
三、 One possible version:
Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choeces such as going boating,climbing a mountain,and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day,we set off early in the moring .While climbing the mountain.we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However.when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二节 开放作文（15分）
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The compasses are big,drawing a circle with ease,while the pencil is small,drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time,however,he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses,even pictures.So in my opinion,while we are confident in ourselves,we should recognize strengths in other and show due respect for them.

1.Deng Yaping
Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
译文：
邓亚萍
邓亚萍，女，28岁，河南人，一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军，并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷，指引她走向成功。4岁时，她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球；8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军；1998年，成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上，她向我们证明了：个子矮小并不重要，勤奋才是成功的关键。
2. 作文原题：
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为：
1. 不应收门票
2. 公园是公众休闲的地方
3. 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。
40％的同学认为：
1. 应收门票，但票价不宜高
2. 支付园林工人工资
3. 购新花木

满分作文列表：

高考满分作文1(1号题)

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

3. The Olympic Games
The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games.
The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor.
It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world.
www.cooyu.net
[参考译文]
奥运会
奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。
奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的，大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目：赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年，然后，公元397年，被罗马皇帝禁止举办。
直到1896年，第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起，奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事，也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。
4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not.
Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.
5.Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health.

So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish.

But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place.

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节 情景作文（20分）
一、 内容要点：
1． 讨论
2． 爬山
3． 捡拾别人（或收拾自己）的垃圾
4． 投放垃圾
二、 说明：内容要点可用不同方式表达。
三、 One possible version:
Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choeces such as going boating,climbing a mountain,and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day,we set off early in the moring .While climbing the mountain.we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However.when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二节 开放作文（15分）
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The compasses are big,drawing a circle with ease,while the pencil is small,drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time,however,he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses,even pictures.So in my opinion,while we are confident in ourselves,we should recognize strengths in other and show due respect for them.

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这个我个人的一些学习感受，一是通过词汇教学训练写作能力。要写好文章不是一朝一夕就能达到的，必须从最基础的词汇入手。扩大词汇量，让你词不离句，强化写作训练。
二是通过一句多译练习训练写作能力。多做一些一句多译练习，这样有助于启发写作思路。写作时选择自己有把握的句子灵活地表达同一内容，减少失误，提高得分率。
三是结合课文进行各种体裁的写作训练。要学好英语写作就必须从课文练起，从一些常见的文体练起，由短到长，由浅入深，循序渐进地进行。
四是通过背诵训练写作。培养英语写作能力，以文章为中心训练写作能力非常重要，因为文章中的句子就是规范的英语范文。把词语放在句型、段落、篇章中去理解、记忆和体味，以至于能够仿写、改写。
五是通过仿写和改写训练写作能力。仿写也是提高英语写作能力行之有效的方法，模仿写作中，格式、构思、表达方式等方面都可模仿。但要注意灵活变通，语句要通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
另外，改写也是一种很好的方法，改写就是对文章材料的文体、式样、句式等进行改编的一种训练方式。无论是改人称、改时态，还是改对话材料为叙述文字，这都有助于复习巩固所学知识，又能培养你所学知识的迁移运用能力，还能起到提高写作能力。
我之前学的那个网络写作班，对学生工作者都很方便，它也是有一个资料的免费获取，报名还赠送语法讲座视频和电子英语杂志，挺好的啊~
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字体端正，改作文很快的，几秒钟，我没改过英语，但是改过河南地理会考卷子的。根本来不及看内容，背几篇固定模式，把字写好，18分以上没问题！