非常重要十万火急！！T-T我想要个合理的作文反馈.有无在线批高考作文（语文英语）的途径（网站/真人）

1 ) Han Mei is a girl who often thinks about others more than herself.
Last Saturday was May 21st. It was her mother’s birthday. She wanted to give her a surprise. She thought for a while. And then she came up with an idea. She said to herself, “ Why don’t I buy some flowers and a birthday card for mum.” Soon she realized that a card was cheaper, but many trees should be cut down. It is well known that trees are very important to our environment. It can stop the winds from blowing the earth away. If we cut down many trees, animals will have no room to live. Our environment will become worse and worse. After a while, she thought that mum might be very tired after working for a long time. She could wash her feet and let her relax. After her mother went home, she did it like that. Her mother was so happy that she praised her for what she had done.
To protect our environment is our duty. We should try our best to improve it。If everyone makes a contribution to our home, the world will become much more beautiful.
韩梅是一个女孩经常想到别人比自己。
上周六是5月21号。这是她母亲的生日。她想给她一个惊喜。她想了一会儿。然后她想出了一个主意。她对自己说,“为什么我不买一些花和一张生日贺卡,妈妈。”不久她意识到一张卡片是便宜一些,但是许多树应该减少。众所周知,树木是非常重要的,我们的环境。它能阻止风从土壤刮走。如果我们
砍树,动物没有房间住。我们的环境会变得越来越坏。过了一会儿,她认为妈妈可能会非常疲惫工作很久了。她能洗脚,并让自己放松。她的妈妈回家后,她是那样的。她的妈妈很高兴她称赞她,她所做的事。
为了保护我们的环境,是我们的责任。我们应该尽最大努力来改善它。;如果每个人都作出欺诈
2）I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school.I like basketball and volleyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We always have a good time!
我有大量的事情要做我的空闲时间。我通常锻炼后,学校我非常喜欢篮球和排球…运动能帮助我保持健康和学习更好的. 我经常看电视,或做一些阅读晚上有时我听音乐一会儿我觉得这是个好办法放松一下…当然,我帮助父母做家务,在周末的时候。我打扫房子,洗衣服和学习烹饪的. 有时候我去郊游和我的朋友我们总是玩得很开心。
3） Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. These days,Li Jia,our classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with the teacher's help. On Wednesday afternoon,she won the first prizein the English speech contest. How exciting it is!We should learn from her. Yesterday,we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all. That's good. I think that as a student,we needn't care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important.
That's all,thank you!
嗨,大家好!这里有两个重要的活动所发生的这个星期。这些天,我们的同学,家,一直在练习英语口语的努力与老师的帮助。周三下午,她赢得了第一个奖的英语演讲比赛。这是多么令人兴奋啊! 我们应该向她学习。昨天,我们把其中200书籍、50元买了4200个背包和学生在四川地震灾区。他独自捐赠了500元,李宇春的最重要的。那太好了。我认为,作为一个学生,我们不必在乎我们应该给。
4） Friday, May 1,2003
FineLily and I went to visit Fujian Museum. It is 2 kilometers away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8 o'clock. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we also saw a lot of soldiers, children with their parents, and students with their teachers. At ten o'clock we left the museum for home. We had a good time today.
2003年5月1日,星期五,
FineLily和我去看了福建的博物馆。它是离我家2公里。所以我们决定去骑车去那儿。我们在8点钟开始。我们在博物馆看到许多照片和其他的东西。我们学到了很多东西。我们也看到了很多士兵,孩子和他们的父母,学生和老师们。我们十点钟离开这个博物馆。我们今天玩得很开心。
5）April 22nd 2004 SunnyToday afternoon we listened to a lecture in the lecture hall of our school. Professor Brown from England gave us the talk. He began his talk in 3:00. There were about 200 students in the hall. Professor Brown talked the differences between American English and British English. All of us listened careful④ and we all took notes. After he finished his talk about an hour, Professor Brown went on answering our questions. This took us about another 40 minutes. But we all felt that we had learnt a lot from him. All of the students decided to work even harder on English from now on.
2004年4月22日下午SunnyToday我们听讲座在我们学校演讲厅。布朗教授从英格兰给我们谈谈。他开始谈论在3:00。大约有200名学生在大厅里。布朗教授谈之间的差异,美国英语和英国英语。我们所有的人,我们都听仔细记笔记。他完成了他的谈话后,大约一个小时,布朗教授继续回答我们的问题。这个我们大概40分钟。但我们都觉得我们已经从他那里学到了很多东西。所有的学生都决定要更加努力学习英语。

呵呵，我是个高中生，对于英语，你最好还是背一些经典句子，这样会使你的行文更加流畅，我就是这么过来的，中考英语满分。加油。
If you want,you can,you can.

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday， just before May Day. My classmates and I went to the park nearby， we didn't go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.

We got there at 9：00. We were divided into three groups and then began working. The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. We worked very hard. At 11：00， when all the work was finished up， all my classmates met again. Although everyone was in a sweat， yet we felt happy because we had done good job翻译；今天是星期六正好是五一节的前一天.我和我同学一起去附近的公园，我们去那里的目的不是为了娱乐，而是为了参加志愿者劳动.
我们于 9：00到达那里.我们分为3组然后开始工作.第一组的同学种树，浇花.第二组的任务是捡起游人丢下的垃圾以及清洗公园里的长凳.我所在的一组是去儿童游乐场擦揩那里的设备.我们工作非常认真.在11：00，当所有的工作都做完时，所有的同学又一次会合.尽管每个人都流出了汗水，但是我们都感到特别高兴，因为我们很好的完成了这个工作. 2 。The summer vacation began today. Summer arrived, but the summer to do? That is to do some different things, but I don't know where to start, and from where the end... Probably didn't start, no end. Summer is such, life is such.
In the eyes of the children, the society is full of beauty, life is a sweet and colorful. In the eyes of the society has two sides, both virtues, and JiaChouE, life has suantiankula. Adults and children's thought, why are so different? Conclusion: it is only a mature and young most fundamental difference.
In the world, everything is two-sided. The adults' experience, they decided to see things very thoroughly. While children to mature, it will need to experience some things. Someone said: "life is a big training ground, is one of the stage. In this special stage, everyone will meet with the sad thing. The sad thing can make people happy, bear enormous pain of things can let a person with good mood. If all people easily, with sorrow and loss of confidence, decadent destruction of pessimism, All happy face, but also will be in front of deluded and lack of social experience, gullible. As the plants cannot lack of sunlight and rain, people can experience in lack of happiness and sadness.翻译；；今天开始放暑假了。暑假到了，但是暑假要干什么呢？觉得是想做一些不同的事情，但是不知道从哪里开始，又从哪里结束……或许本来就没有开始，没有结束。暑假是这样，生活也是这样。
在孩子们的眼里，社会总是充满着真善美，生活是甜蜜而多彩的。在大人们的眼中，社会是有两面性的，既有真善美，又有假丑恶，生活具有酸甜苦辣。为何大人与孩子的思想有那么大的差别?结论只有一个：这是成熟与稚嫩最根本的区别。
大千世界中，任何事物都具有双面性。大人们的阅历丰富，决定了他们看东西比较全面。而孩子要走向成熟，就必定需要经历一些事情。有人说：“生活是一个大练兵场，是磨砺人的舞台。”在这个特殊的舞台上，每个人将会遇到开心的事情与悲哀的事情。悲哀的事情会使人承受巨大痛苦，开心的事物会让人拥有美好的心情。如果整日面对悲事，人容易丧失信心进而自暴自弃、颓废沉沦；而整日面对喜事，人又会被眼前的事物所迷惑，缺乏社会经验，容易上当受骗。正如植物不能缺少阳光与雨水一样，人的经历中不能缺少快乐和悲伤。 3. Stay at home doing homework, boring, besides reading or television, accompany maternal grandparents play a deck of CARDS, fun. Mother told me very hard, often in my ears, and will let my nagging review several English language, say what "immediately, junior high school graduation is so relaxing!" I had my fate, darling, only 5 days to finish the homework half! Amazing! Though my summer vacation, but still caravan sighed, "closed", alas, self-study luck!
Swimming is my indispensable summer in sports, in a fierce flied in mercilessly with will make it BiZhanZhan, cool, cool water body, then soak heart. Although in the swimming pool, but occasionally sips of water in the pool is wonderful feeling, fine! In the hot summer, a dog style, few breaststroke, have a kind of recreational and fashionable feeling.
Summer is comfortable, insipid, also have happiness. Bored and happy life翻译 呆在家里做功课、无聊,除了阅读或电视,伴随外祖父母玩扑克牌,有趣。妈妈告诉我,常在我耳边,会让我唠叨检视几个英文,说什么“立即,初中毕业的时候很轻松啊!”我有我的命运,亲爱的,只有5天时间完成作业一半!棒极了!虽然我的暑假,但仍然商队叹了口气,“关闭”,唉,自学好运!
游泳是我的夏季不可或缺的运动,在一场激烈的纸灰转与将使它BiZhanZhan无情、冷却、冷水浸湿身体,然后心。虽然在游泳池里,但偶尔几口池子里的水是美妙的感觉很好!在炎热的夏季,一只狗的风格,几个蛙泳时,有一种休闲、时尚的感觉。
夏天是舒适、平淡,也有幸福。无聊而快乐的生活

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday， just before May Day. My classmates and I went to the park nearby， we didn't go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.

We got there at 9：00. We were divided into three groups and then began working. The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. We worked very hard. At 11：00， when all the work was finished up， all my classmates met again. Although everyone was in a sweat， yet we felt happy because we had done good job
翻译：今天是星期六正好是五一节的前一天.我和我同学一起去附近的公园，我们去那里的目的不是为了娱乐，而是为了参加志愿者劳动.
我们于 9：00到达那里.我们分为3组然后开始工作.第一组的同学种树，浇花.第二组的任务是捡起游人丢下的垃圾以及清洗公园里的长凳.我所在的一组是去儿童游乐场擦揩那里的设备.我们工作非常认真.在11：00，当所有的工作都做完时，所有的同学又一次会合.尽管每个人都流出了汗水，但是我们都感到特别高兴，因为我们很好的完成了这个工作.
2 。The summer vacation began today. Summer arrived, but the summer to do? That is to do some different things, but I don't know where to start, and from where the end... Probably didn't start, no end. Summer is such, life is such.
In the eyes of the children, the society is full of beauty, life is a sweet and colorful. In the eyes of the society has two sides, both virtues, and JiaChouE, life has suantiankula. Adults and children's thought, why are so different? Conclusion: it is only a mature and young most fundamental difference.
In the world, everything is two-sided. The adults' experience, they decided to see things very thoroughly. While children to mature, it will need to experience some things. Someone said: "life is a big training ground, is one of the stage. In this special stage, everyone will meet with the sad thing. The sad thing can make people happy, bear enormous pain of things can let a person with good mood. If all people easily, with sorrow and loss of confidence, decadent destruction of pessimism, All happy face, but also will be in front of deluded and lack of social experience, gullible. As the plants cannot lack of sunlight and rain, people can experience in lack of happiness and sadness.翻译；；今天开始放暑假了。暑假到了，但是暑假要干什么呢？觉得是想做一些不同的事情，但是不知道从哪里开始，又从哪里结束……或许本来就没有开始，没有结束。暑假是这样，生活也是这样。
在孩子们的眼里，社会总是充满着真善美，生活是甜蜜而多彩的。在大人们的眼中，社会是有两面性的，既有真善美，又有假丑恶，生活具有酸甜苦辣。为何大人与孩子的思想有那么大的差别?结论只有一个：这是成熟与稚嫩最根本的区别。
大千世界中，任何事物都具有双面性。大人们的阅历丰富，决定了他们看东西比较全面。而孩子要走向成熟，就必定需要经历一些事情。有人说：“生活是一个大练兵场，是磨砺人的舞台。”在这个特殊的舞台上，每个人将会遇到开心的事情与悲哀的事情。悲哀的事情会使人承受巨大痛苦，开心的事物会让人拥有美好的心情。如果整日面对悲事，人容易丧失信心进而自暴自弃、颓废沉沦；而整日面对喜事，人又会被眼前的事物所迷惑，缺乏社会经验，容易上当受骗。正如植物不能缺少阳光与雨水一样，人的经历中不能缺少快乐和悲伤。 3. Stay at home doing homework, boring, besides reading or television, accompany maternal grandparents play a deck of CARDS, fun. Mother told me very hard, often in my ears, and will let my nagging review several English language, say what "immediately, junior high school graduation is so relaxing!" I had my fate, darling, only 5 days to finish the homework half! Amazing! Though my summer vacation, but still caravan sighed, "closed", alas, self-study luck!
Swimming is my indispensable summer in sports, in a fierce flied in mercilessly with will make it BiZhanZhan, cool, cool water body, then soak heart. Although in the swimming pool, but occasionally sips of water in the pool is wonderful feeling, fine! In the hot summer, a dog style, few breaststroke, have a kind of recreational and fashionable feeling.
Summer is comfortable, insipid, also have happiness. Bored and happy life翻译 呆在家里做功课、无聊,除了阅读或电视,伴随外祖父母玩扑克牌,有趣。妈妈告诉我,常在我耳边,会让我唠叨检视几个英文,说什么“立即,初中毕业的时候很轻松啊!”我有我的命运,亲爱的,只有5天时间完成作业一半!棒极了!虽然我的暑假,但仍然商队叹了口气,“关闭”,唉,自学好运!
游泳是我的夏季不可或缺的运动,在一场激烈的纸灰转与将使它BiZhanZhan无情、冷却、冷水浸湿身体,然后心。虽然在游泳池里,但偶尔几口池子里的水是美妙的感觉很好!在炎热的夏季,一只狗的风格,几个蛙泳时,有一种休闲、时尚的感觉。
5）April 22nd 2004 SunnyToday afternoon we listened to a lecture in the lecture hall of our school. Professor Brown from England gave us the talk. He began his talk in 3:00. There were about 200 students in the hall. Professor Brown talked the differences between American English and British English. All of us listened careful④ and we all took notes. After he finished his talk about an hour, Professor Brown went on answering our questions. This took us about another 40 minutes. But we all felt that we had learnt a lot from him. All of the students decided to work even harder on English from now on.
2004年4月22日下午SunnyToday我们听讲座在我们学校演讲厅。布朗教授从英格兰给我们谈谈。他开始谈论在3:00。大约有200名学生在大厅里。布朗教授谈之间的差异,美国英语和英国英语。我们所有的人,我们都听仔细记笔记。他完成了他的谈话后,大约一个小时,布朗教授继续回答我们的问题。这个我们大概40分钟。但我们都觉得我们已经从他那里学到了很多东西。所有的学生都决定要更加努力学习英语。

夏天是舒适、平淡,也有幸福。无聊而快乐的生活

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要写成什么水平？
My answer to this question is YES. Banks play in the development of industry and wealth. It is more than just an institution for people to save or withdraw money. The real nature of banks is exchange. Without exchange, when man was in the savage or pastoral stage, he produced for himself everything he consumed.For example,(自己举几个例子，比如生产面包的要花钱买面粉，付工资给工人直到面包售出等等，一个例子约三十来个词吧)。These conditions would be as nearly impossible without banks as would be an efficient exchange system without money

Furthermore, If everyone who needed to borrow money was forced to search about for someone who had just the right amount to loan, there wouldn't be much business.

On top of that, banks are storehouses where the equivalent of money may be accumulated and loaned for the purpose of creating more wealth.

if most banks went bankrupt after the crisis, that would be a disaster to the economy. Even though most deposits (such as savings and checking) at registered banks may insured by the government (also in some cases you could not get all your money back according to your account type and balance). People stll lost big time and didn't trust anyone to hold a nickel. If we do have a major bank collapse, it will domino from one to another and the losses will be more than can be covered.

总体感觉词汇各方面基础不错，意思表述较清晰，可以给22分吧。只是语法上要多多注意，有几处小错误：
1 前后的单复数、时态不一致：
For example ,when disposable chopsticks were used ,it is likely to be discarded. were used和it is单复数和时态不一致 。如果你前面were used是虚拟的话，后面用it would会比较好。
as you know that disposable chopsticks 中的that 应为 those。
2 该用句号使用了逗号。要注意英语中，一个句点前只能有一套主谓宾结构。
On the other hand ,as you know that disposable chopsticks are made of wood ,if more disposable chopsticks were used, more trees will be cut ,more forest will be destroyed ，and vast areas of land will become desert,the rainstorms will cause floods easily .其中，made of wood后面应该是句号。另外用and连接多个并列结构时，and应放在最后，所以vast前面的and要放到the rainstorms will cause floods easily 前面。
3 Time goes by 前面要加as，这样他才是一个状语，否则就是一个句子，后面就不能是句号。或者也可以在it may lead to 前面加and。
4 it may leads to 这样可不行哦。may后面要跟动词原形。
5 同样最后一句“，so in order to live a better life ,it is vital to stop using disposable chopsticks . ”是一个完整的主谓宾结构，前面的逗号改为句号。
6 注意A is vital to B 的用法，首先to后面要跟名词或是动词ing形式，如education will be vital to the success of their students.教育对孩子的成功将起到重要作用
it is vital to meeting their demand .这对满足她们的需求十分重要。
而文中的it is vital to stop using disposable chopsticks .抛开语法不说，意义上也不太准确。你想表达的意思是停止使用一次性筷子是十分重要的，不如用 i strongly appeal that it is high time that we stopped(注意是过去式) using disposable chopsticks .

其实，作为高中生写的还是不错的，其中有不少高级词汇和表达。不过，高考作文采用的是扣分制（不知道你们是不是？可找老师求证），出现的语法结构错误，都会有扣分。最好能减少语法错误。

具体方法：
1 每次的作文找老师修改过后，再重新写一遍，反复诵读或背诵。
2 多看范文，积累好的句型结构。
加油，相信你会取得更大进步，争取写出满分的英语作文！

it is likely to be discarded
many much more

结构很合理，阐述在详细点就更好了

when disposable chopsticks were used ,it is likely to be discarded. 前后时态不一致。as you know that disposable chopsticks are made of wood ,if more disposable chopsticks were used, more trees will be cut 此句不通，另时态不对。,it may leads to many much more may后面跟动词原形。many much more serious disasters ...many? much? more?你到底想用哪个呢？ 另用therefore好过so

《我的快乐》一

马的快乐是飞奔在一望无垠的草原上；鸟的快乐是翱翔在广阔蔚蓝的天空中；鱼的快乐是潜游在碧波荡漾的深海里；蜡烛的快乐是燃烧自己为他人带来光明；求知人的快乐是在题海中不断奋斗、前行，努力触碰希望的羽翼。而我的快乐，小小的，隐藏在花园里，在爷爷那个充满生机的花园里。

冬日，百花凋零。如今，南方的冬天是很难见到雪的，没有银被素裹，乐趣自然丧失不少，可是，我却有我的乐趣。冬季是梅花盛开之时，小小的梅花张着，散发着冬季独有的清香。摘几朵放在水面上，看着水纹带着它到处飘荡，我会心的笑着。

春，万物都复苏了，几天之间绿色朦胧的笼罩了整个花园，绿叶悄悄的爬满枝头，小草露出尖脑袋，还顶着一顶亮帽子。我便在草间草间唱歌跳舞，花草成了忠实的观众。看着绿色一天天醒目，心情不觉舒畅了。

秋天是丰收的，友好必有坏，所以树叶也都渐渐变黄、掉落。小草业没了往日的蓬勃生机。可是乐趣却一定存在，坐在草地间，吃着刚从树上摘下的新鲜柿子，心里爽着……

夏季很热，毒辣的太阳晒的人们不愿出门，园子里的枇杷树却像一把大伞一般的撑着，坐在躺椅上，星星点点的阳光洒下来，很梦幻，手里轻摇着芭蕉扇，听着知了浑厚的嗓音，头脑里想着“小荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头”的美景，心只觉惬意浓厚。

生命中有许多的快乐，说不定快乐正在某处酝酿着，等候着你的光临……

《我的快乐》二

在我们的生命中,有快乐也有痛苦.快乐是一种享受,而痛苦是一种考验;想要有快乐的收获,一定先要经过辛苦的耕耘.如农人在温暖的春天里播种,火热的夏天耕耘,凉爽的秋天收割,才能得到冬天的享受.

在生活中,我的快乐秘方就是在家里痛快的唱歌,因为每当我心情不好时,只要放下唱片,听那优美的旋律,心情就会随著旋律起舞,彷佛周遭的一切都变得美好,想像自己在音乐中飞舞,所有的烦恼和不快乐全都在音乐中烟消云散.

放开喉咙,自由自在地歌唱,是多麼快乐的一件是啊!每当放学回到家里洗澡时或是上音乐课时,都是我最高兴的时候,因为我可以自由自在大声地唱,不用担心遭人嘲笑,当我听到愉快的节奏,我的心情就会跟著飞扬起来,忘掉一切不快乐的事,所以唱歌是我的快乐秘方.

总之,快乐与痛苦是相对的.任何事,只要你意志像磐石一样屹立不摇,下苦心去做,就算失败了也不要气馁,再接再厉,一定就能成功.等到你尝到成功的滋味,那种心中的喜悦,才是人生最大的快乐.

那时候地快乐是单纯的.

《我的烦恼》一

不知从何时起，成长的烦恼组合了起来，对于有着许多牢骚要发泄的我来说，这个题目好亲切。辛弃疾曾经说：“少年不识愁滋味”。或许是他老人家的少年时代无忧无虑，随着历史的不断发展，把越来越多的烦恼，统统留给了我们。
随着我一天天的长大，有很多的烦恼围绕着我。在学校里发生的一些事情，大多不愿与家长谈论，因为只要一谈，他们就要长篇大论，不准我插一句话，而且我的耳朵也受不了那么多话的进出，所以我不愿让耳朵受罪，就不想与家长说啰！然而，我就把一切想说的话，每天都写在一个本子上，也就是日记。写完后，让自己欣赏，自己来解决自己的事情。开始进行的很好，可是渐渐的，我觉得家长们看我的眼神很不自然，似乎我有一些事情瞒着他们。（的确有些是不想让他们清楚）
那天，我放学回家，写完作业后，按照常规，去拿日记本，忽然，我发现日记本被移动过，我顿时火冒三丈，一想便知道一定是他们。我走出卧室，大声问他们是不是看过我的日记？他们反而正大光明的说，了解我的全部，是他们的义务。
我受不了了，我只是想拥有自己的一片蓝天，你们为什么这样自私的夺走它，就是想要了解我吗？我回到房间里，觉得自己已经什么都没有了，唉！为什么家长在我们长大后总想了解我们，不想让我们有一点自己的想法，唉！太残酷了！
我们的生活充满了七色阳光，但即使是在阳光普照的时候，也难免出现短暂的阴云。成长中的少年，会有一些挥之不去的烦恼。这些烦恼来自生活，来自学习，来自与同学的交往……但是，有烦恼并不可怕，关键是要正确对待它。从现在起，让我们一起清理烦恼，消除烦恼，带着多彩的梦走向成熟。

《我的烦恼》二

“某某某（自己名字），该去补课了！作业有没有做？没做快补！真是气人!”唉！又是老妈的唠叨声，这一切都是补习班害的。
自从我升到到初三，老妈为保证我不比别的孩子差，竟给我报了六七个补习班。语文、数学、英语......这些东西成天在我的脑子里转来转去。学校里的作业已经够多的了，在加上学校补课和补习班，足以让我晕头转向的了，连可怜的周末也被补课占用。
周末就是让我们休息的嘛！
星期六，我终于无聊的补完了学校里的课，垂头丧气的来到家，津津有味的玩起了电脑，“哈哈，又过关啦！”我在电脑旁高兴的叫道。但好景不长，我还没玩十分钟左右，电话铃就响了，我接过电话，一听是妈妈，“喂，是（自己名字）么？你怎么在家哪？我不是叫你每个星期六下午补完课后，买点东西吃，之后就去上语文课呀?”可恶，忘了还要上语文，“你怎么还在那愣着，还不赶快去上课！”我无奈的关掉电脑，无精打采地提这书包，向补习班走去。
我的补习时间非常紧：星期六下午去补英语，之后去补语文，之后回家吃口饭，再去补数学，星期六就这样过去了，大部分都用在补课上。周七就更惨上午学乐器，中午休息一小时，之后去上英语，上完之后再用30分钟吃晚饭，之后还去上数学和语文，6点还要去学棋。等与说我只有大概10个小时不到来休息、吃饭、玩耍、学习......
都是补课惹得祸，如果不补课，我就能多学一点，如果不补课，我就能多玩一点，如果不补课........老爸老妈，我知道你们希望我比其他人优秀，比其他人好，但你们有没有想过，给我报怎么多补习班，不但不会学习进步，还会导致我有一种不想学的心态。所以为了你们的孩子，请开开恩吧！！！

“人生不如意之事十之八九”。生活和学习中的烦恼如海浪一样向你扑来。这件恼人的事刚过，那一件又来了，让你防不胜防。
这不，刚下课那烦人的英语老师刚走，这节又是语文课。而这节又是作文课，语文老师也真是的，每周布置作文至少一篇，多则两三篇，并且作文时间有限，一节课必须完成500字以上的作文。 每次语文老师一写完作文题就走出了教室。于是同学们就埋头写，可我则天资愚顿，材料想得不快。同学们以下笔很久了，可我还在冥思苦想。教室里很安静，只听见笔在纸上走出的沙沙声，没有一个同学东张西望。只有我笔在手中不停的转，没有一丝灵感.每一次我都要过的七八分钟才能勉勉强强的动手写几个字，由于平时的积累不够再加上时间的限制，又不会组织材料，因此作文一直不怎么样，所以，一到作文课我就会一种有莫名的烦恼。
有一次语文老师布置一道作文题《感受生活》，虽然我按时在下课之前完成了。但作文发下来后，语文老师的评语是：“内容马马虎虎，没有感情流露。”五十分。没办法，只好在下课时看看别的同学怎样写，下一次写作好借鉴，可是最后到我自己运用时描写的却又不像同学那样生动，天呐,我该怎么办才好！
就像那首歌里的歌词一样“最近比较烦，比较烦……”我不是最近烦，我是一提作文就烦。这不，这次作文《我的烦恼》，也不知道得过多久我才写上题目，再写上内容，哎！“人生不如意之事十之八九……”

“人生不如意之事十之八九”。生活和学习中的烦恼如海浪一样向你扑来。这件恼人的事刚过，那一件又来了，让你防不胜防。
这不，刚下课那烦人的英语老师刚走，这节又是语文课。而这节又是作文课，语文老师也真是的，每周布置作文至少一篇，多则两三篇，并且作文时间有限，一节课必须完成500字以上的作文。 每次语文老师一写完作文题就走出了教室。于是同学们就埋头写，可我则天资愚顿，材料想得不快。同学们以下笔很久了，可我还在冥思苦想。教室里很安静，只听见笔在纸上走出的沙沙声，没有一个同学东张西望。只有我笔在手中不停的转，没有一丝灵感.每一次我都要过的七八分钟才能勉勉强强的动手写几个字，由于平时的积累不够再加上时间的限制，又不会组织材料，因此作文一直不怎么样，所以，一到作文课我就会一种有莫名的烦恼。
有一次语文老师布置一道作文题《感受生活》，虽然我按时在下课之前完成了。但作文发下来后，语文老师的评语是：“内容马马虎虎，没有感情流露。”五十分。没办法，只好在下课时看看别的同学怎样写，下一次写作好借鉴，可是最后到我自己运用时描写的却又不像同学那样生动，天呐,我该怎么办才好！
就像那首歌里的歌词一样“最近比较烦，比较烦……”我不是最近烦，我是一提作文就烦。这不，这次作文《我的烦恼》，也不知道得过多久我才写上题目，再写上内容，哎！“人生不如意之事十之八九……”

我有一个小小的烦恼，它时常在我的生活中露脸，虽然只是露脸，可也多多少少让我感到有些郁闷。现在，大家帮我分担一下这个烦恼吧。

本来嘛，我的相貌就不十分好看，塌鼻子，大嘴巴，除了眼睛大一点，我的相貌算是一无是处。就这样，尊敬的上帝还不放过我，又给我来个“锦上添花”———皮肤黑。

据说，我刚出生时皮肤极黑，而且背上、屁股上全是胎记，奶奶说：“这孩子让阎王爷打的，不愿来呢。”长这么黑，谁愿来啊。

从记事起，“黑”这个词就比其它c olour在我生活中出现的频率高得多，大家都“黑玫瑰”、“黑牡丹”的叫我，我也不愧对于这些称号，一到夏天，皮肤像刷了一层黑油漆似的，别提了。但傻姑娘一个的我还认为“牡丹”和“玫瑰”都是大家赞美我呢，我还对自己的黑颇为得意呢。

长大后，有了自己的审美观。常听大人们夸女孩白又漂亮，加上电视广告中介绍的都是增白的东西，可没有增黑的东西，心里顿时很受挫。不仅如此，我的“黑”成了我的“小辫子”，孩子们自然都懂得他们比我白的优势，闹矛盾时，他们一句“黑不溜秋靠边站”就能让我哑口无言。还好，我人缘比较好，“小辫子”不时常让人揪啦。

上学后，“黑”真的染黑了我心里的一小片天空。出奇的是，当时的男孩子都十分白，我自然成了他们逗趣的对象，尝试着为自己辩解了一次，连小时候“黑玫瑰”、“黑牡丹”的外号都抖了出来，结果适得其反，哎！气呼呼地跑回家，吃着妈妈做的大虾，又不生气了，“好姑娘不生气，小白脸何足挂齿。”

如今，随着我的日渐变白，以及周围人对我“黑”的熟悉，我对自己“黑”的问题已经不以为然了。“黑”多好，是健康色哩，有一种阳光朝气，充满力量的美，许多人还去专门晒黑呢，那都是水货哦，我才是正宗的！而且，“黑”让我的知名度大大提高，学校里，知道“黑妹”的人绝对比知道于梦瑶的人多，家里，弟弟妹妹都认为我姓“黑”，一开口就是“黑姐姐”。由于“黑”，我的名号可比你们多多了，可以和古人媲美了，都是朋友们进献给我的：“非洲难民”、“矿工”、“黑妹”、“黑妞”、“黑人”……我一一笑纳，更有趣的是，以我名号命名的产品也多了起来：黑妞吸吸糖、黑人牙膏……我的知名度还真高。黑也是我身上的一大特点，一大亮点呢！

我为什么会黑呢？I don ’ t know ，你为什么会白呢？I don ’ t know牞 too 。据说妈妈怀我时十分爱吃核桃和烤羊肉，和这有没有关系呢？麻烦大家帮我想想。

人生像一条石子小路，没磨平的绊脚石就是我们的烦恼，而只要我们去正视它，它迟早会磨成一颗光滑的鹅卵石，如果我们逃避，绕道而行，迟早会遇见更大的绊脚石。我已感到我的绊脚石变得光滑起来，你的呢

反弹有规矩还有个头发的风格很符合风格的上更广泛的分隔符好哥哥发布和新疆习题集听错吧符合符合的风格不规范和部分 的风格覆盖面有她的一个的费用股一夫当关》

我的快乐是不用再被动写作文啦、哈哈、

我的快乐是：日本动画片《守护甜心》，《双子星公主》，《偶像公主》全集看完了。