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各位英语大佬看一下这篇作文有没有语法问题哦

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各位英语大佬看一下这篇作文有没有语法问题哦

请英语高手帮我看下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误~

是从语文作文书上翻译过来的~rnThe SeedrnThere blew the wind. I suddenly found something dropping. It was an air bubble. I was attracted by it, and could not help catching it. With curiosity, I poke the bubble. In it there was a seed, glittering and translucent, spread fragrance far and wide.rnI took it home and told my father about the seed. I gave it to him. He was seriously ill in bed. The seed shined bright and warm, yet my father seemed to be younger. How miraculous it is!rnAt once, I put the seed into a flowerpot. Brightly and clearly, the moon shined in the night sky. The seed sprouted. Soon it became a small tree, green and luxuriant. But my little guest shrank naughtily when I walked towards it. The next day it grew into a very, very big tree. The flowerpot was broken and the tree’s root pierced into the earth.rnMore and more people heard the news. They surrounded the tree. It was really a large crowd. A grey-headed old man said with excitement,” ‘I find you after all, ‘Divine Tree’!”, while he was touching the tree.rnIt is said that hundreds of years ago, Russians used “Divine Tree” as timber to make warships. Cartridges would jump into the sea if they attack these ships. “Divine Tree” is also used to cure people of their illness and prolong their lives. Because of the foregoing, some people cut cortex at night, and then more and more people did it. The condition was too terrible that the army had to move troops to protect the tree.rnShivering alone in the cold wind, “Divine Tree” became weaker and weaker day after day. It seemed that the tree was saying to me, “My dear friend, I’m now covered with wounds the whole body, I’m really suffering… At first I wanted to stay here for a long time. But I have seen that human beings are greedy, so I have to leave for another safe place. In return for you, I give you a seed. And I hope you will take good care of it.”rnThe sun woke me up. I ran towards “Diving Tree” as fast as possible. Just as my dream, it departed from me. I felt grieved, and then walked into my room. There was something black on the desk. It was a seed that “Divine Tree” gave me. Could it grow into a big tree?
1 spread fragrance far and wide, （spread 应为spreading）
2 The condition was too terrible that the army had to move troops to protect the tree. （too 改为so）
翻译得不错！
两个错误，翻译得很好，我看的错误，跟那位yaojoyau一样，你继续加油！你将来一定能成为英语奇才！
spread应为spreading,
没有
翻译得很好

英语一2021年小作文 英语大佬看一下有没有语法错误，哪里需要改正的 谢谢？

 

am apologize 就是错的 。语法都不对，过去时？现在进行时，你想要那个时态来表达？
come back ， 你这个时态也不对 、
算了 你还是把中文写出来我帮你翻译吧
你这字看得眼睛疼
第一句话改成I'm apologizing...
应该是as new as the way it looks like when you gave me
最后一段第一句，应该改成Thank you for lending me the music CD. (在这里用lend是因为，感谢别人借给你CD，而不是感谢我借了他的CD。这是borrow和lend的区别，主体不一样，borrow的主体是自己，lend的主体是别人，要搞清楚感谢的对象是别人，因为借给你CD这个动作主体是别人)

英语作文 I first time I。。求英语高手帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误。谢谢

Everyone has his or her first times. For example, the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal... I still remember the first time when I learned to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I thought it was dangerous, but my father told me, "you have to learn to ride a bike, or you can't go to the park with us by bike." Then he helped me day after day, and I fell off the bike again and again. I hurt my arms and legs many times. However, finally, I could ride the bike freely. How happy I was!
Everyone has a lot of first times. For example, the first time to ride a bike, the first tiem to cook a meal... I still remember the first time when I learned to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I thought it was dangerous, but my father said to me, "you must learn to ride a bike, or you cannot go to the park with us by bike." Then he taught me every day. I fell down again and again. I hurt my arms and legs many times. However, finally, I could ride the bike and I was very happy.
Everyone has a lot of first times,such as the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal,etc. I still remember the first time when I learnt to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I thought it was dangerous, but my father said to me, "you must learn to ride a bike, or you cannot go to the park with us by bike." Then he taught me every day. I fell down again and again. My arms and legs got hurt serious. However, ,I could ride the bike finally and I was very happy.

英语大佬们帮忙看看这篇文章有没有错误？比如语法呀？单词拼写等。

你好, 高兴帮助你,

回答, 改动见下方

My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn

Festival. It's a traditional Chinese

festival. It usually falls in September

or October. 如果你们学了从句, 可以用更高级的表达 It's a traditional

Chinese festival which falls in

September or October. I often eat

mooncakes and watch the bright full

moon on Mid-Autumn Day. I like

this festival because I can eat

mooncakes and spend some quality

time with my families. Mooncakes

are sweet and they come in

different flavors. They taste

great ! My favorite kind is the one

with yolk fillings. I really love

Mid-Autumn Festival .

我用了些更生动, 详细的描述, 使整个表达更流畅, 丰富。 望采纳！

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