我想问问天津第一次英语高考作文没写连词像什么beside啥的都没用但是用了很多难的词汇作文会给多少分

其实英语写作一提高，其他的就都跟着提高了。
亲身经历告诉你！希望有帮助！
我是08年山东考生，离高考100天冲刺时英语成绩大概在90分左右，语法基本靠语感，也不是完全不懂，但就是很怕。我不停的变换策略，试图找一个能提高的方法，基本每天都做2套卷子，原来好像有个叫金考卷的卷子，很多，但效果不明显，因为做过了，错的题不能很好消化，而且我特别讨厌阅读题，没心情往下读，而且最后的作文平时练习时也不写。然后我就开始转换思路，每天一套卷子，写一篇作文（限时！！一定要规定时间），让老师帮忙看。你知道，英语总是在不知不觉中提高，开始，我的写作让老师很生气，因为我总是单独找老师帮我纠正，所以只要出现相同的错误，老师就很不耐烦，就会训我，我觉得很受打击，但我没停止写，但不找老师看，就根据每次老师给我找到的常犯的错误修改。而且阅读理解里也有很多好句子好句型，考试的时候可以在阅读里留心一下，模仿一下。
开始我成绩提高不明显，大概3-4次周考之后，成绩一下到了100以上，我觉得很不可思议，随着坚持，成绩一直进步，最后高考英语我是131分。真的，英语贵在坚持，不要一次考得不满意就放弃，找到合适的方法，真是蓄势待发。等待你爆发！（PS：大学我选了英语教育专业，这段经历对我自己而言也是小小的奇迹，现在我在读英研一年级。）
以下是我高考前曾经的应试小技巧。关于英语考试各题型时间分配：
我把英语考试大致分三个时间段：
记得第一题应该是听力，每天早上学校都会集体放录音听一套卷子，这样我感觉就足够了。但错题一定要整理，看看到底哪出错。（30分钟）
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第二题应该是单选语法之类的，大概15个，我这个题基本是心里很打鼓，错的很多，说实在的，这道题只有15个，基本拉不开距离，我语法也迷迷糊糊的，所以基本就是对10个左右，一遍就选，不浪费时间。
完型，我是内容和要填的空先顺下来，大概了解意思，然后再精细的读和做题。固定搭配，联系上下文的空很多，有剩余时间时在检查一遍，但第一次的选择很重要，一般不是十分确定就不要改。
阅读，我现在做的方法肯定和原来不一样，因为那时候是决定命运的考试，所以我也是每篇做题前先泛读一遍，然后细读，一道一道的去文中找。老师让我先读题再读文章，但我尝试之后觉得不起作用，因为我总忘了题目是什么。
阅读表达，一样的方法，只不过换成了简答和填空。（1小时左右，难易程度不同）
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写作，我已经提过了，别跑题，句子语法不要有硬伤。多读多背好句子好句型。（写作大概要留30分钟—20分钟）
希望你能取得好成绩！

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：
1．认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。
2．理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

最后一个月如何训练英语写作

1．重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一。

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用（ontheotherhand,however,furthermore）、作者的表达方式（词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用）、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

2．在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练。

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

英文写作“四步走”

由于时间限制，高考时一般在15分钟左右必须完成英语作文。高考的英语作文步骤如下：
1）作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。
2）考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。
3）边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。
4）写完后一定要再细看一遍。

主要体裁作文写作技巧

（一）写提示议论文应考虑的几点：1.文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句（topic）阐明观点或看法。
2.会使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由（supportingsentences）。
3.归纳总结，首尾呼应。

（二）看图作文应考虑的几点：1.看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。
2.确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。
3.确定体裁（说明文还是记叙文），接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。
4.根据图片或图表大意议论。

http://www.gougou.com/search?search=%E9%AB%98%E4%B8%AD%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87&restype=-1&id=10000001&ty=0&pattern=0这里有一些可以下载来学习的，与你要的有关，去看看吧，希望你能找到你需要的！！！

我告诉你一些经验吧
.背课文和参考例文.每次考试后老师因该会把考试作文的范文抄出来,自己抄下来,能背下来最好,不行也要熟读.课文就不用说了,每篇至少要读5遍.
2.背单词.我这里说的单词不仅仅是指课本上的单词,要尽量加大自己的词汇量,所选单词的最好出处是平时所做的阅读和完形,每天背上几个自己感觉高级德词汇.有时,同一个意思,词用的好可以添不少彩(例如说大可以用big,large,huge,但很明显用后两个效果要好于第一个)
3.记住典型文章的格式.目前高考的英语作文以应用文为主,记住应用文的一些基本格式是保证分数的关键(例如写书信开头就可以来上一句i'm
writing
to
tell
you
something
about....).
4.记住一些经典句子.在英语作文里如果能用上一些英语谚语,那是非常处彩的(例如说一个有两面性的事情可以说:but
as
everyone
knows,every
coin
has
two
sides.)d
5.语言要地道.英语作文的一大忌就是使用chinglish,也就是中国式英语,有些意思如果表达不出来就换个说法,语言是活的,使用简单平庸的句子总好过错误德、滑稽德句子。
作文是个长期的工程，不是一朝一夕就能见成果的，一定要坚持下去。

曾经我的英语作文也很差，不过，高三后期找到方法，进步了很多。1.买点作文模板，背一些好的句型，可以套用的。这个真的有好处。2.平时多注意积累一些固定搭配的短语，词组。3.平时有意识的去划分句子成分，对我们写句子的结构，有好处。希望能真正帮到你。

其实英语考试不过就是区别你的词汇量和你的语法熟练程度,把你书上的英语单词都背会,实在背不下来的记住汉语意思就可以了,然后语法不是要你全背,把典型的语法的词句多看几次,大概熟悉下语法,多听听口语锻炼下你的语感.估计很快会提高,主要就是单词.词汇量多了你的作文自然就会比较有文采

我的四六级应试经验——给和我曾经一样抱怨“英语基础差”而畏惧四六级的同学。

我在大学本科阶段一共参加了四次大学英语四六级考试，其中四级和六级各两次，每次的考试成绩分别是：

英语四级(第一次) 449
英语六级(第一次) 521
英语四级(第二次) 622 (听力224 阅读204 综合65 写作和翻译129)
英语六级(第二次) 606 (听力206 阅读220 综合59 写作和翻译121)

适逢十一加中秋长假，我在感谢论坛上以前同学发表的四六级考试经验给我带来的帮助的同时，也想把自己4次参加英语四六级考试的经历与应试心得与大家分享。虽然我的英语四六级分数并不是最好的，并且考过GRE/TOEFL/IELTS的同学肯定也不会把四六级放在眼里；但是我认为我从四级及格到六级600+的经历可以给自认为英语基础差而畏惧四六级的同学一些借鉴，毕竟四六级是绝大多数大学生都要参加的考试。我希望这篇帖子能够抛砖引玉，让大家分享各自的学习心得，总之不要让英语四六级考试成为我们在大学学习期间的绊脚石。

我经常在帖子中看到不少同学抱怨自己英语基础差，以至于考了很多次四六级都没通过或者每次都是424分之类，从而对英语丧失信心等等。我想这大可不必。因为我也是“英语基础差”的大军中的一员。我进入大学的时候由于高考英语成绩不理想而被分到了英语B班，以至于无法较多地了解“英语基础好”的英语A班同学的风采和学习策略。

大一下期，我鼓足勇气参加了四级考试，险些没做完。结果阅读理解部分错掉一半，听力和写作部分也很不理想，幸好是很多同学认为不容易得分的综合部分鬼使神差地给了我一个接近圆满的分数才让我侥幸通过四级。我的四级成绩在班里排名垫底，四级550+的同学摩拳擦掌开始准备口语考试，而我在一边庆祝侥幸通过的同时，一边也在为六级考试以及我的英语能力或者说是英语应试能力而深深担忧。

而到了大二上期，本来不打算参加六级考试的我看到不少同学都踊跃地报名，我也准备试一试，就当是积累经验。对付这次六级考试，我购买了一本按照词频归类的词汇书，并没有做如同阅读理解200篇等大量模拟题，而是买了最近五年的真题一共十套，在考前的两三个月，在每个周末按照考试规定的每个部分，包括作文和听力，都必须提前两分钟完成，因为正式考试的时候需要填写和核对机读卡。开始的时候仔细阅读总会超出五分钟以上，导致后面的完形填空时间紧张。做了四五套真题，粗略估算总是在及格线附近徘徊。在周末完成了真题之后，我在周一到周五每天花费二十分钟左右根据参考答案上面的答案解析总结每种题型的命题思路。我觉得这是一个熟能生巧的过程，每次都有进步，到了最后几套，粗略估计应该在480分左右。在六级考试的前一天，我特意到准考证上标明的第二天正式考试的教室完成了最后一套真题，当天晚上把这10套真题中做错的题目和答案解析全部浏览了一遍，然后把参考范文中以前勾画的经典句子背诵了一遍。结果让我惊喜的是正式考试的时候我竟被安排在了前一天我做真题的同一个座位。怀着这种轻松的心态和认真完成10套真题带给我的对试卷中每个部分题型的熟悉，我十分意外地提前了10分钟完成了全部题目，最后得到了520+，随后报名参加了口语考试。

小结一下：有了以上的经历，我明白了做真题或者说是研究真题解析的重要性，在此之前我一直对此持有多多少少的怀疑态度。我相信不少的同学对此也存在疑惑。我认为做真题至少有以下4点好处：(1)目标明确，节省时间和金钱(当然，之前应该熟记考试词汇，至少是高频词汇)；(2)每年的题目难度相对稳定，可以检测自己的真实水平；(3)可以更为直接地了解命题者的思路(必须认真研究答案解析)；(4)可以熟悉每个部分在试卷中的位置，在考场上不至于慌乱，我认为这一点对在考场上的心态调控非常重要。因此，坚持两三个月、平均每天花费半个小时以内研究真题，最后在英语六级中获得中等的分数——我推测这种方法应该具有一定的普遍性。

在大三的时候，一部分准备留学的同学选择了G/T/E考试，但更多的同学因为不满足第一次英语四六级考试的分数，进而继续报名参加，希望获得更好的成绩(即所谓的“刷分”)。大三的专业课学习极为繁忙，因此能够留给英语的时间相应地减少了很多，需要我们采取更好的策略。我坚持这种方法，最后在第二次四六级考试中都取得了600+的成绩。以下是我的应试经验，希望大家能够有所借鉴，同时也欢迎大家提出其他的或者更好的方法，让后来者少走弯路。

（一）总体策略：按照前面的分析，以研究真题为应试的核心，之前应该熟记高频词汇。在完成真题的时候应将每个部分控制在考试规定的时间内，之前应该了解在正式考试的时候两张答题卡分别在什么时候交以便灵活控制时间。在做题的时候应该让自己具有在考场上的心态，之前应该像参加正式考试一样做好准备工作。虽然这里说得很多，但是到了后来也就是非常自然的事了，以至于最后真正参加考试的时候比平时操练真题的时候更为放松。

（二）写作：首先应该有整齐的书写，尽量减少涂改。写第一段的时候尽量不要太快，之前应该判断这是哪种类型的作文。在主体段落的写作中应注意灵活使用连接词并要有举例说明。结尾时若要提出自己的观点应该较为客观，不要过于偏激；若要归纳总结，应恰当地运用平时熟练掌握的相关句型。最后检查一遍，绝对不能出现错拼单词、主谓不一致、误用动词时态等低级错误。要特别强调的是，平时操练的时候应该在保证基本正确的前提下，注意词汇、句型使用的多样性，不能通篇高中词汇或简单句型，这在六级考试中更加重要。

（三）快速阅读：这种题型的技巧是题目的顺序一般与在文中出现的顺序一致，可以通过在文章中勾画并标出题号来帮助定位，题目本身的难度较小。快速阅读之后，老师会收答题卡一。

（四）听力：在平时操练的时候应该养成注意力集中的习惯，不过在正式考试时如果第一题没有进入状态也没有关系，忌讳疑虑太重，从而影响到接下来题目的回答。听力部分比较困难的是长对话部分，因为几乎没有时间阅读题目，我一般首先浏览长对话部分的题目，再看前面的短对话题目。我认为听力中最容易拿分的是复合式听写，原因是完全不需要理解所听写的文章的意思，只要把单词和句子正确写下来就行。对于句子听写，我的观点是完全按照所听到的内容写下来，不到万不得已不要用自己的语言，因为自己并不知道标准答案中哪些是要点需要写下来而哪些不是要点可以省略！我一般在第一遍的时候把每句话能写多少写多少，中间没听到的用一根横线空出来，然后第二遍、第三遍听的时候就把句子填空变成了短语填空、单词填空。还有就是要注意在填写单词的时候一定要注意动词的时态，因为口语中的不完全爆破可能会略去如动词过去式的词尾等等。我一般在做复合式听写的空余时间将机读卡涂上，这样可以为后面的仔细阅读、综合和翻译节约时间。此外要提醒没有参加过四六级的同学，听力考试中有的考场使用录音机，有的考场使用耳机。如果使用耳机，一定要准备一个质量过关的，用之前确定电池电量足够，这是不少过来人的惨痛经验。

（五）仔细阅读：这个部分的第一篇在四级中为选词填空，在六级中为简答。一般而言，做选词填空时把词性先标注出来有利于解题，而简答题大概有一两道题需要自己稍加分析。总的来说，第一篇还是比较简单的，如果卡壳了也不必纠缠，毕竟此题的分数比较少。第二篇和第三篇是传统的阅读理解题，分值较多，也没有太多的切实有效的技巧，需要在平时的操练中多读答案解析。如果在每篇的五道题目中选择了三个相同的选项，那么一定要认真检查是否出了差错。

（六）综合：这个部分是完形填空或者短文改错。完形填空比较简单而且分值不重，况且一般来说这个时候已经没有充足的时间让人反复推敲，对于那些拿不准的就没有必要耿耿于怀了。我在第二次参加四六级的时候都没有遇到短文改错，只不过说不定以后会有，还是稍加准备为好。我在读第一遍时经常很不幸地只能改出两三个错误，但是多读几遍大概还是能够做出六到八个，动词的时态、主谓一致、连接词等为考试的重点，一定要注意那些需要联系上下文才能改出来的错误。

（七）翻译：平时需要积累一些常用的固定表达和语法知识如虚拟语气等。我对虚拟语气记忆犹新是因为几乎每次遇到虚拟语气都会做错，参加的最后一次六级考试也做错了唉。只不过下次也不一定会考，但是还是了解一下这些语法知识为好。

（八）补充：我认为对于一些对考试比较紧张的同学在正式考试之前的一至三天按照准考证的要求到相应的教室按照规定的时间完成一套真题是很有必要的。此外，每次做题的时候都应有计时工具。

现在进入了十月份，距四六级考试还有两个多月的时间。我以前曾经痛恨或厌倦准备四六级考试，但到了后来觉得这是促使我学习英语的一个途径，有了这样的心态，面对这样的考试我就有了强劲的动力。此外还要感谢论坛上曾经为我们无私地提供英语学习方法的战友们。

希望我的从四级449分到六级606分的经历能够给那些和我曾经一样抱怨“英语基础差”而畏惧四六级的同学一点借鉴，从而顺利地通过大学英语四六级考试，把更多的精力投入到自己喜欢的领域中去。

你们肯定是小组组织开班会去问问你的组员

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怎样学好高中英语?找到答题技巧
现在我们不管是在哪个阶段学习,英语这也是一种必须学习的科目,但是英语对于女孩来讲,还是比较拿手的,但是对于男孩子来讲,这真是一件头痛的事情,你们该怎样学好高中英语,你们都知道英语这个科目有哪些类型?分为几个板块?

高中英语课本
我相信很多的孩子都不知道该怎样学好高中英语,尤其是男孩,我来给你们分享一下英语的答题技巧.
(一)听力
刚刚提到,把提早预备好的句子以及一些词组都备好后,然后就开始看听力.
但是在做听力的情况下,先前的几个题目,描述这道题的句子比较短,要是在考试刚开始的时候好好听听力,你可以先看看.熟悉一下.
(二)作文
做完这道题之后,你再去看下作文,先审好题,明白写作的请求.理解下作文的内容和考虑下请求表达内容所需求的短语句型.想着你刚才看的问题,去做其他题型.在做其他题型的时候,发现有好的句型,则能够划下,等着写出好的作文.
(三)阅读
先阅读,后完型,语法填空看搭配
阅读首先要看题干,剖析题干类型,是宗旨大意题、细节了解题、推理判别题还是猜想词义题,根据各个题类型的解题技巧去解题.
如碰到宗旨大意题时,则最好把四个选项都看下,由于总有一个选项是契合文章主题的.然后再分享提干之间的关系和倾向,其实有的时分不需求看文章,就能选出个别题的答案.
你们要先把开头看清楚,首段前几句,留意关联词,要是你们看见但是这个单词就要关注一下他之后的句子.假如前几句没看明白,完形就很难拿高分,没看明白,就多运用语法去剖析,重复了解,理解文章的人物事情等;其次看末段,最后一段就要点名写作者的中心思想,懂得篇目的主题.
(四)语法填空
这和每一个语句表达都差不多,先剖析句型,看看到底缺不缺中间这一部分再分离语法搭配,肯定词性,再去填.考点也差不多以动词名词为主,其他词性一到两个.
(五)作文
运用可用的句型短语,分离写作请求吧自己的文段都些好.还是要先看看标点还有就是这些字母的大小;同时,留意用过渡词,分清要点等.

高中英语知识点
现在的孩子们应该都有自己拿手的科目,还有自己不喜欢的科目,但是对于男孩子来讲应该拉分的科目就是英语吧,对于怎样学好高中英语我给你们说了很多关于英语的答题技巧,希望可以帮助到你们.

高中和初中英语就词汇量，语法，固定搭配，教材内容，文化背景都有很大补充

上课就听听新单词有哪些，记一下用法，背语法，偶尔收获一点文化常识吧
如果你不知道高中学什么你去翻一 翻高三英语复习资料（特别是语法书）哈哈哈哈，你估计是不知道的，那都是要背的，要学的
英语大家都很早就开始学了，英语是学一门语言，高中在初中的基础上就是多了解一些单词和用法而已。
但是词汇也有高级词汇和初级词汇。
1.用词的准确度，比如教堂，大教堂小教堂和我们平时说的去做礼拜的教堂其实是不一样的单词 chapel cathedral church更大的词汇量可以帮助你找到最准确的表达
2.用词凝 炼。比如因宗教原因迫害，你要表达这个意思，你可以用初中单词说，kill some people due to the difference of religion
你也可以用一个单词就表达了perscute
3.很多人进了高中之后都会有一段时间英语是吃初中的老本，这很正常，如果你初中英语够好的话，但是，你会发现这使你越来越力不从心，哈哈哈哈，如果你自以为初中那点词汇量就够高考的话，哈哈哈哈隔
4.当然我知道英语好的人其实有的根本不听课，但是不听课不代表他们没有学，为了高考他们可能已经背完了四级词汇，他们背单词背了一遍就真的记住了，他们就算不听课也随时能回答出老师的问题。这种人上课不听课也没啥，但是如果你不是这种人的话还是虚心一点听一听老师在讲啥。
5.一百分制考八十五我并不觉得是属于那种不听课的哈哈哈，我一百五十分制高考英语失手（自揭伤疤）一百三十八点五，（我知道试题有难易，高考题比较简单，你们平时训练的题可能比较难）
但是我还是建议听课，因为不听课只适合于高三最后冲刺阶段，那时候你英语可能已经扣不了几分了，提高不了多少保持就行，但是你目前我感觉才高一就这样不听课的话当你回过神来会发现你已经错过很多了。

主语从句 宾语从句 定语从句 表语从句 同位语从句 虚拟语气 直接引语和间接引语 情态动词 倒装句 虚拟语气 强调句 将来时的表示方法 主要是这些大点。我就是教高中英语的

同位语,宾语,定语(最多),谓语从句,最后俩最重要..还有些非谓语,情态动词,介词与连词,等等.其实我现在学下来觉得和初中没什么区别,原点是一样的,就是阅读听力和作文难了,你要学好就多练这些,特别是作文,要求很高,不像初中只看字数和语法,现在还和语文一样看意味..　

必修一到必修五，后面是选修6到8。
自学的话，爱慧外语，艾宾浩斯记忆+逆向法，练习听力效率不错，还是免费的，班上英语好的都在用

　　 Olympics and I
　　Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　奥运与我
　　亲爱的朋友，我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。首先，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3％的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外， 5 透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会，此致。

　　Tourism in China
　　Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
　　中国旅游
　　最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47％城镇居民定期作出旅行，28％的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。
　　
　　What a disaster(灾难)!
　　So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
　　什么是灾难（灾难）！
　　到目前为止，有报道称，超过60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡，再加上数百万人民有成为homeless.And他们在疾病和其他困难的危险之中。无论如何，感谢所有善良的人们，在国内外形势已经改变well.But我们仍然在努力工作的，特别是为那些无家可归的人建造房屋和医治受伤群众。 现在我们可以做什么？除了做好自己的工作做好，我们可以捐钱给them.We坚信，有党和政府的坚强领导，有全国各族人民的援助国，这将是一个抗震救灾的胜利！
　　　　
　　The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
　　在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。 而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18％的平均收入是用于这一项目。 2008年，这一数字增长到30％。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。

I'm very happy to receive your letter， and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street， which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there， and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms， one of which is bedroom， the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed， a sofa， a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat， and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish， but I'll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough， write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon！

All the best！

Yours，

Li Hua

我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文在这里。我已经找到了你菲亚特。正是在芳草街，这是不远处建新中文学校。巴士11号能带你那里，它是一个中文学校前停止。该单位是在3间客房，其中三楼是卧室，另外两个是浴室和厨房。有一张床，沙发，办公桌，在这25平方米的有椅子米小菲亚特，租金每月500元。也许这菲亚特并不像你想好，但我会尽我所能来满足您的需求。如果它不适合的话，写信给我，我将寻找一个更好的地方。

希望您能尽快来到这里！

所有最好的！

你的，

李华

2009年广东高考英语满分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文
游客应该给动物拍照吗？
考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。
当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。
如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。

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假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
英语作文网

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming
亲爱的大卫,

我很高兴你要到北京去学习汉语。汉语是非常有用的,许多外国人正在学吧。对你很难,因为它是相当不同于英语。你必须记住尽可能多的汉字。它也是重要的事要做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视和听广播练习听力。尽你所能去跟人在中国。你可以从书本中学习汉语不但也从你身边的人。如果你有任何问题,请叫我。我确信你会学好中文。

希望很快再见到你在北京。

你的,

王明

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请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情况；
(3) 解放后的变化；
(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
我的家乡
我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它矗立在很宽的河,有丰富的鱼米之乡”。
但在过去的日子是一个贫穷和落后的小镇。许多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。
我的家乡是1949年解放的。从此发生了巨大的变化。街道被加宽。工厂、学校、医院、影剧院如雨后春笋般涌现出来。人民的生活是大大提高了。
我爱我的家乡。我喜欢它的更多的人。他们正在努力工作以使它还更丰富、更美丽。

三

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2.80—100词左右；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈),

你每天都很忙,你不太注意你的健康。我很担心你的健康。我想给你一些建议。我听说步行是最好的运动。你的公司没有离家很远,是吗?为什么不走到办公室去吗?你最好锻炼至少每周一次,如打网球训练。去游泳,也是一个不错的选择。更重要的是,它必须有健康的食物。不要太晚睡。有足够的睡眠能帮助你的大脑的工作做得更好。

爸爸,请接受我的建议。我真希望你身体健康!

爱你的儿子(女儿)。

汤姆(玛丽)。

四
Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)
四
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈),

你每天都很忙,你不太注意你的健康我很担心你。我希望你能保持健康。你经常开车到你的办公室。不远. 有什么关于行走,因为它能使你更强的吗? 我想要你去打篮球和游泳在健身房每周至少一次。这是很重要的,吃健康的食物,如蔬菜、肉、蛋和水果。虽然你的工作很努力,但我还是希望你能早点上床睡觉,这样你就能得到足够的睡眠。

我盼望收到你的来信。

爱你的儿子(女儿)。

汤姆(玛丽)。

五

随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：1. 词数80—100左右。

2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体

reduce diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.

Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.
如阳光体育发展我国政府重视学生的健康和复活,每天锻炼一小时,让病”。到目前为止我们学校的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。现在我们有更多的时间做运动或者放学后在早晨。我们踢足球、篮球、羽毛球和游泳。他们让我们的大脑放松,让我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩。我们已经变得更有活力。首先我们学习都得到改善。

让我们花每天锻炼。它能增强体力、减少疾病。

六
Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.
体育锻炼身体的力量,建立我们减少疾病。

虽然我们过上更好的生活,我们的身体越来越差了。所以每天锻炼一小时,让疾病”已经在政府部门。

放学后我们中午或打球、游泳和运行。看!操场上显得比较小,因为许多学生都玩它学校的生活变得丰富多彩,我们是精力充沛的. 因此,我们在新的一年里更用功、更上一层楼。

在阳光明媚的运动带来了一个令人兴奋的变化给我们。让我们继续做这件事。

七
Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.
七
职业或家庭:哪一个更重要?

当问及他们自己的事业和家庭,进行的一项民意调查显示,人们总是有不同的反应。一些人认为它更重要的是去追求自己的事业,而总是有别的人争辩说,家庭应该是人的生命。

它没有任何问题,事业起到了至关重要的作用,在我们的日常生活中。首先,在职业生涯所能给我们的生活目标。没有职业,我们的生活一定会浪费时间。更重要的是,职业,可以给我们提供一个生存的意义。大部分的人获得他们的收入来自一份工作。另一方面,家也是不可或缺的重要组成部分,随着越来越多的人将生活的承认。家庭往往被认为是女性的地方,让我们可以逃避烦恼的生活。此外,我们可以获得一种归属感,从家庭。没有它,任何人都会感到孤独绝望。

在我看来,事业和家庭不是相互对立的。相反,它们可以增进彼此的生活能使人变得越来越好。因此,这不是一个选择,而是一个正确和错误的理想和实用。之间,

八
Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,
奥运会和我

亲爱的朋友,

我有一个好消息告诉在这里。经过多年努力,北京被授予举办2008年奥运会。作为一个居民在北京,我感到很兴奋,并且想要与你分享我的快乐。

这次成功意味着很多,我不仅仅是一场比赛。首先,这个游戏一定会促进中国经济的发展。根据最近的一项调查,这个游戏专家将提高我们的国内生产总值约3%,并提供大约10,000个工作岗位。更重要的是,我们的文化将被广泛认可和接受,世界各地的游戏。人们将从世界的每一个角落,体验中国文化的各个方面。除此之外,通过游戏,我们的生活环境将会大大提高。例如,北京的公共交通系统将被更新。同时,众所周知,更多的树木将被种植、草原会大大扩展了。

我的朋友,我真的很期待即将到来的这一伟大的游戏。就个人而言,我已经准备好提供给我的帮助。我也希望能邀请你来这里,看了2008年奥运会。

真诚的你,

九

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
九

中国旅游

近年来,我国旅游业的趋势增长较快。根据最近的一项调查由一些专家的47%,城市居民出行规律,也让他们28%的农村居民对全国巡演。调查还显示,越来越多的人都很感兴趣,并将旅游业今后参军。

面对这种趋势,我们不禁探索一些潜在的因素是可靠的。在最初的地方,以改革开放政策,中国人民的生活水平大大提高,因此,他们中的大多数人能买得起去环游世界。更重要的是,它被认为是现在人们采取更积极的态度去旅游,并把它当成一种生活方式。此外,旅游设施正变得越来越好。例如,交通运输发展迅速,许多景点都有空。

十

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.
What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
十

什么灾难(灾难)!到目前为止,据报道有超过60000人死于四川地震。更重要的是,数以百万计的人们已经变得无家可归的. 他们还在危险的疾病和其他的困难。无论如何,谢谢所有善良的人们,在国内外局势已经改变,好吧但我们仍然努力,特别是建造房屋为那些无家可归的人们和治愈受伤的人。
我们现在要做什麽?除了做自己的工作,我们可以捐一些钱给他们我们坚信,在党和政府的坚强领导,并与全国各族人民在整个国家的援助,这次地震救灾一定会取得胜利!

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．

高考满分作文1(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我们60％的同学认为，入场费没有达到人们的预期，有一个公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以在家里或工作的一个很好的时候，他们不也忙。如果收门票必须由一个公园的旅客支付的，有必要建立一个大门和围墙。在最后一个城市将在一个坏看看。我们40％的同学认为，入场费可以接受，但不能过于昂贵。从门票销售的钱可用于支付公园的园丁，购买鲜花和一些其他种类的树木。
至于我自己，我觉得入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。我们是否有同感，亲爱的编辑？
此致
李华

高考满分作文2(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。 60出100学生认为，收门票，不应该购买前一进入公园，因为它是一个公共场所去时，都是免费的。如果要购买机票，大门和墙壁都必须有一个公园，这将使城市建成很丑陋。四十出100学生认为，收门票，应以前购买的一进入公园，但门票的价格应该是合理的。钱，是从售票获得可用于支付园艺工人和购买鲜花和各种树木。至于我自己，我真的觉得公园的好地方到周末和节假日。同时，我们作为游客，应支付入会费，当我们进入公园。毕竟，它需要很多钱，以保持良好的工作秩序公园。你是否同意我的，亲爱的编辑器？
李华

考满分作文3(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我的同学，60的占百分之认为入场费不应该强迫公众的想法。他们认为，公园的地方，市民享受闲暇自己。他们认为，一门和哀号的兴建，如果收门票，收费。这座城市将不再那么美丽，因为它应该有。四十我的同学占百分之的思想，入场费是行，但不应该失去控制。入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新类型。至于我自己，我想说，如果我们大家努力建设成为一个花园，谁对公园门票为关心我们的城市？

李华

高考满分作文4(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。反对的收费公园占60％的门票。他们是一记，公园是供公众享用。如果优惠票公园的游客要求，一门要设立等，对四周的墙壁。如果是这样，上海将不看的，因为它美丽会。否则，那些在收取公园占40％的门票赞成票。他们都认为，门票价格应适当控制，而且入学金可用于支付园丁和购买花木新的类型。真理掌握在多数人的手中。我的论点是否立场，因此，亲爱的编辑器？

高考满分作文5(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。在所有我们谁也参加了讨论，60％的份额的观点，即入场费不应该收取点，而40％的市场份额持相反意见。那些谁不同意这样的看法认为，公园是一个地方，公众可以用他们的乐趣业余时间。在这个想法的支持，对那些认为公园门票不能失去控制。反对的人士则认为，一个城市的面貌将受到损害，因为门和哭声将建立门票如果要收集。那些谁的想法一致认为入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新品种。我认为它利大于弊收取一个公园入场费。我说得对，编辑器？
此致
李华

这应该很容易看懂呀，用得着翻译么

【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

1．外出购物

2．替房东还书

3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电

注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua

威尔逊夫人，
我要出去购物，也不会下午5时00分左右才回来。我已与我的两本书，你要我回到市图书馆。下午约1时许下午，保罗称，说她不能满足博尔顿咖啡明天上午你，因为她参加一些重要的事情来。她觉得很遗憾，但他说，你可以设置一些会议的其他时间。她想你叫她尽快回来你的家。她已经把这件事告诉转变苏珊。
你的，
李华

[名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

Computer
As we all know, the computer is a marvelous machine. It has all kinds of types. Nowadays most computers have a memory processor in which information can be stored and be taken out at any time.

The oldest kind of computer is the abacus. It was used in China long agoi The first modern computer was very large and expensive, but now scientists already have been making computers smaller and cheaper, at the same time easier to use and work faster and faster now.

Computers can be used a great deal in many ways. It can do many kinds of work. They can be used in doing business and science research work, in some large factories, and our daily life. We even use it to play computer games at home. Today a lot of people buy computers. Computers is becoming more and more popular indeed.

计算机

众所周知，计算机是神奇的机器。它有各种类型。现在多数计算机均有存储器，信息可以随时被存储或提取。

最古老的计算机是算盘。算盘很久以前在中国使用。第一台现代计算机非常庞大和昂贵，现在科学家们已经使计算机变得更小和更廉价，同时更易于使用，并且运行速度越来越快。

计算机可以充分用于很多方面。它可以做很多事。它们可用于商业，科学研究，大工厂及我们日常生活。我们甚至用它在家玩电脑游戏。现在很多人购买电脑，计算机变得越来越普及

以上翻译是用谷歌翻译的，有些语句错误，很容易看明白，还需要你自己校核一下

试题：第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：
1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；
2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：
(1)读信后的感受；
(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；
(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

二、评分标准
项目 分值 评分标准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相关的信息, 有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含较多不相关的信息, 有较多的抄袭原。语言结构不够正确，行文不够规范。
0---1 没有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相关的信息, 大多数句子都照抄原文。语言结构不正确，行文不规范。
写作 18---20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14---17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11---13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7---10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
4---6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1---3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇及其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。
0 以下几种情况，给0分：
1） 完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不对题
3） 只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容。

三、任务型写作评卷场评分细则
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序 1分
3．改变主语或宾语的抄为主 2 分 (灵活地抄)
4．稍为改动总体的抄 3分
5．改变句子、用词，重新排列组织 4—5分 (字数不特别要求)
◆120字自主写作
1．感想，语言，内容，连贯性
2．语言为主, 内容的相关部分，综合考虑连贯
3．首先看语言是否合格
4．内容： 读后的感受, 成长的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了阅读理解中的素材不算抄袭
6．内容偏离的时候以语言为主

四、学生习作选评给分情况
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is due to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I’ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn’t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.

2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won’t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum’s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won’t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.

3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don’t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I dust hope can live happily and have a strong body. What’s more, wish you will healthy forever.

4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I’m totally moved by your words, my great father. I’m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn’t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I’m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can’t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.

5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn’t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn’t do well for myself.
I can’t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．

高考满分作文1(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我们60％的同学认为，入场费没有达到人们的预期，有一个公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以在家里或工作的一个很好的时候，他们不也忙。如果收门票必须由一个公园的旅客支付的，有必要建立一个大门和围墙。在最后一个城市将在一个坏看看。我们40％的同学认为，入场费可以接受，但不能过于昂贵。从门票销售的钱可用于支付公园的园丁，购买鲜花和一些其他种类的树木。
至于我自己，我觉得入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。我们是否有同感，亲爱的编辑？
此致
李华

高考满分作文2(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。 60出100学生认为，收门票，不应该购买前一进入公园，因为它是一个公共场所去时，都是免费的。如果要购买机票，大门和墙壁都必须有一个公园，这将使城市建成很丑陋。四十出100学生认为，收门票，应以前购买的一进入公园，但门票的价格应该是合理的。钱，是从售票获得可用于支付园艺工人和购买鲜花和各种树木。至于我自己，我真的觉得公园的好地方到周末和节假日。同时，我们作为游客，应支付入会费，当我们进入公园。毕竟，它需要很多钱，以保持良好的工作秩序公园。你是否同意我的，亲爱的编辑器？
李华

考满分作文3(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我的同学，60的占百分之认为入场费不应该强迫公众的想法。他们认为，公园的地方，市民享受闲暇自己。他们认为，一门和哀号的兴建，如果收门票，收费。这座城市将不再那么美丽，因为它应该有。四十我的同学占百分之的思想，入场费是行，但不应该失去控制。入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新类型。至于我自己，我想说，如果我们大家努力建设成为一个花园，谁对公园门票为关心我们的城市？

李华

高考满分作文4(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。反对的收费公园占60％的门票。他们是一记，公园是供公众享用。如果优惠票公园的游客要求，一门要设立等，对四周的墙壁。如果是这样，上海将不看的，因为它美丽会。否则，那些在收取公园占40％的门票赞成票。他们都认为，门票价格应适当控制，而且入学金可用于支付园丁和购买花木新的类型。真理掌握在多数人的手中。我的论点是否立场，因此，亲爱的编辑器？

高考满分作文5(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。在所有我们谁也参加了讨论，60％的份额的观点，即入场费不应该收取点，而40％的市场份额持相反意见。那些谁不同意这样的看法认为，公园是一个地方，公众可以用他们的乐趣业余时间。在这个想法的支持，对那些认为公园门票不能失去控制。反对的人士则认为，一个城市的面貌将受到损害，因为门和哭声将建立门票如果要收集。那些谁的想法一致认为入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新品种。我认为它利大于弊收取一个公园入场费。我说得对，编辑器？
此致
李华

这应该很容易看懂呀，用得着翻译么

【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

1．外出购物

2．替房东还书

3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电

注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua

威尔逊夫人，
我要出去购物，也不会下午5时00分左右才回来。我已与我的两本书，你要我回到市图书馆。下午约1时许下午，保罗称，说她不能满足博尔顿咖啡明天上午你，因为她参加一些重要的事情来。她觉得很遗憾，但他说，你可以设置一些会议的其他时间。她想你叫她尽快回来你的家。她已经把这件事告诉转变苏珊。
你的，
李华

[名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

Computer
As we all know, the computer is a marvelous machine. It has all kinds of types. Nowadays most computers have a memory processor in which information can be stored and be taken out at any time.

The oldest kind of computer is the abacus. It was used in China long agoi The first modern computer was very large and expensive, but now scientists already have been making computers smaller and cheaper, at the same time easier to use and work faster and faster now.

Computers can be used a great deal in many ways. It can do many kinds of work. They can be used in doing business and science research work, in some large factories, and our daily life. We even use it to play computer games at home. Today a lot of people buy computers. Computers is becoming more and more popular indeed.

计算机

众所周知，计算机是神奇的机器。它有各种类型。现在多数计算机均有存储器，信息可以随时被存储或提取。

最古老的计算机是算盘。算盘很久以前在中国使用。第一台现代计算机非常庞大和昂贵，现在科学家们已经使计算机变得更小和更廉价，同时更易于使用，并且运行速度越来越快。

计算机可以充分用于很多方面。它可以做很多事。它们可用于商业，科学研究，大工厂及我们日常生活。我们甚至用它在家玩电脑游戏。现在很多人购买电脑，计算机变得越来越普及